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cin

Hi, this is one of my drawings. Enjoy or not, or at least share your opinion [;

bombardier

-SPI-

Yep, that pretty much sums it up right there.

cin

well... how about using some words ? [;

tynic

Ach, mein Augen.

MagicToaster

AH!!! Me wa itai da!!!

paulwind

It could be worse, at least it's not about video games.

drinkinstout

bombardier wrote:

That rocks my socks!

As for the OP, I'm pretty lost actually....

CatnipCat

In the case this isn't a troll, then you need to work on your art and your writing. And putting filters on copyrighted images is just retarded. Other than that, good luck.

cin

i'll keep that in mind

Arfenhouse

(This is if this is not a troll post. If it is, I hate you.)

Tips:

1. Capitalize the first word of your sentences, end them with periods. Doesn't matter if you're trying to look rebellious, you just look stupid when you can't even use proper grammar in something you're "publishing".
2. Profanity does not equal funny. Just because you threw a "fucking" and "fucked" and a drug reference in there, does not mean we are going to say "oh cool, he talks like us!".
3. Now as far as the art goes...I can see SOME (only some) beginnings of a something there, but for the sake of our eyes and wives, don't touch Photoshop until you have practiced your skills way, way, WAY more than you have already.
I'm sure you're more than welcome to start out in the doodle thread, throw some sketches in there, see what we like. Then if you see that you are getting better, in the future (NOT NOW), start your own thread with a plethora of SKETCHES and REAL work. Stuff that we can look at and criticize. Then, after you've grown and become comfortable with your skills offline, put them to use in Photoshop. This should not be sooner than about a year and a half or so. That's if you plan to practice alot. And learn. And invest money and time. Etc.

trixtah

ostriches should be designed to ride hippos...

You should use your space better. I'm not sure if it was said already but there's a huge white gap...did you run out of material or what?

Prospicience

those are totally not real star wars quotes.

core tactic

That last one isn't even a drawing.

PHONEY!

CatnipCat

I call shinanagins

core tactic

That deathstar one is filtered too if you look closely.

JRosey

I like that RTD2 is a coffee pot. Everything else makes me die.

World as Myth

The Death Star looks like a pokéball.

core tactic

World As Myth wrote:

The Death Star looks like a pokéball.

Hey, you read my mind!

MagicToaster

I never got why Pokémon has an accent on the e. The stress is clearly placed on the o... also, the way it's pronounced makes me think it should be more like Pòkemon, with a falling tone, rather than a rising one.

CheerfulBear

It has less to do with stress and more to do with the pronunciation of the E.

People might be inclined to pronounce it "poke mon" if they were retarded. You gotta be careful about that shit.

falconire

The spoungebob drawing is totally sick, good stuff but the other one seems roughly done.

cin

You dont have to hate me Arfenhouse, thanks for advice. Last one is not a drawing, because i did not wanted it to be one. Yes it's a filtered photo. But for some purpose. Thanks anyway.

Grifter

cin wrote:

Yes it's a filtered photo. But for some purpose. Thanks anyway.

I'm guessing the purpose is that it's enabling you to be lazy.

In any case, this comic is poorly presented in all forms of the concept. The drawings are half-assed. The colouring is right on par with the drawings being complete shit and the jokes are even worse than the art. You have oodles of work. Learn to draw. There's nothing else to teach you here. Start studying. When you have some basic ideas of form and function involving anatomy, space, and humor then we can talk.

Ranger Rick

I would like to see light saber Christmas lights adorning my tree next year.

Vargas Prime

It would have been a better idea if you actually used lines from the Star Wars movies, and thought of ways to misrepresent them by drawing a situation that makes the line funny.

As it is, you're just making things up, and mostly, they're not funny. Or really creative. And your cartooning needs a lot of work. Study basic drawing, don't just copy the way other people draw cartoonish figures.