Common Sense

NakinataNakinata Registered User
edited January 2007 in Artist's Corner
A friend and I started our own webcomic awhile back, and while it is no Penny-Arcade, we do enjoy writing and drawing it. Any critique or feedback will be appreciated. Thank you for your time and we hope you like it.

Please don't whore your Webcomic in your first post. It's just Common Sense... Also it's against the rules. - DMAC

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  • SpilltoySpilltoy Registered User
    edited January 2007
    edit: mmmmmmm.

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    I really don't.
  • OrikaeshigitaeOrikaeshigitae Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited January 2007
    i think my eyes were just poked out by all that JAGGED TEXT

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  • NakinataNakinata Registered User
    edited January 2007
    I'm not liking the font too much myself. I have been trying to look for a good font, but the fonts I have found cost money, if anyone knows any good comic fonts. Please do feel free to share.

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  • Toji SuzuharaToji Suzuhara Southern CaliforniaRegistered User regular
    edited January 2007
    Nakinata wrote:
    I'm not liking the font too much myself. I have been trying to look for a good font, but the fonts I have found cost money, if anyone knows any good comic fonts. Please do feel free to share.

    On a hunch, I typed "comic fonts" into Google, and the first result was a site with simultaneously good and free comic fonts.

    I'd stay away from the weird filters for textures. It looks really bad.

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  • paulwindpaulwind Registered User
    edited January 2007
    Llamas do NOT say "meewah."

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  • DMACDMAC Moderator mod
    edited January 2007
    I like how the formatting of the text on the sign in the background changes in every panel. Normally I wouldn't encourage this sort of thing, but why wouldn't you just draw that background once and then copy and paste it?

    Also, on top of the painful art going on (filters, stock Photoshop brushes, crazy-ass perspective, etc.), nothing here is really funny.

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  • MagicToasterMagicToaster JapanRegistered User regular
    edited January 2007
    Please, no filters.

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  • BuckwolfeBuckwolfe Registered User regular
    edited January 2007
    Doesn't look like he'd have a hard time liberating that llama considering that its not even in an enclosed pin. The llama could just walk out anytime it wanted to.

    Also, whats up with the grass. First there's long shadows being cast, then there are...well I'm not even sure what kind of shadows those are in the second panel. Then the grass changes inside the animal pin. Then some of the shadows move, and others disappear. And then in the last panel the shadows come back and as a result it looks like the grass dies.

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  • drinkinstoutdrinkinstout Registered User
    edited January 2007
    my favorite part is the ever changing building sign.

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  • ArfenhouseArfenhouse Registered User
    edited January 2007
    I see what you did there. ;)

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  • Grim OutlookGrim Outlook Registered User
    edited January 2007
    i don't like web comics about people who try to kidnap and eat llamas after tempting them with a badly drawn/written sausage/pun

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