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DrLavitzDrLavitz Registered User new member
edited January 2011 in Artist's Corner
So I was browsing these forums and saw some really nice work and some not so much, but it made me want to draw, so I busted out the tablet and started.

This is what I've got so far. It's still a WIP.


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If I finish it I'll post it when I do.

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  • wakkawawakkawa Registered User regular
    edited January 2011
    Basically from what I can see is that the characteres lack form. You have sketched in the skeleton I see, but you need to draw around guidelines to form planes to give the characters form.

    different-head-angles.jpg

    Also, the design of the dragon thing is a fair bit naive. You are going for a Face-off side view composition, while fairly boring, works as intended. But with a such a simple layout you need to work on the silhouette to make the image interesting. Not only does the dragon's head lack form, but the design is basic as you can get.

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  • RankenphileRankenphile Passersby were amazed by the unusually large amounts of blood.Registered User, Moderator Mod Emeritus
    edited January 2011
    be cautious of proportion, too. The man's head is gigantic compared to his torso, and your dragon, if he closed his mouth, would have an enormous underbite.

    Moving this drawing to a view that is less of a dead-on side view would give it a lot more life. Right now it is incredibly flat.

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