The Mi Go

Personface

Having been on a little Lovecraft kick recently I decided I wanted to do a large scale pic of the Mi-Go, or Abominable Snowmen.
This is a very loosely interpreted portrait colour sketch to decide design early on.
Opinions as I progress? Please be brutal.

Indica1

What have you done to my dreams?

Personface

I'll take that as a compliment and press onwards.

Flay

Coming from another lovecraft fan, I like it! It's always difficult to critique stylised work, but right now the head, wings and torso feel very much like they're on the same plane. Try to make sure you use some visual cues that suggest depth - overlapping forms and some higher-constrast shading. Looking forward to seeing some more abominations.