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evilapathyevilapathy Registered User regular
edited December 2011 in Artist's Corner
new attempt at a web comic, part 1
lion-rampant-part-1-web-1.jpg

feed back would be appreciated

thank you

Baz

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  • m3nacem3nace Registered User regular
    You know, there is an edit button ;)

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  • MustangMustang Arbiter of Unpopular Opinions Registered User regular
    This is more of a story book with pictures than a comic.
    You need to work on telling more of your story with the images; text in a comic is should only be used to fill in the blanks, not drive the story.

  • evilapathyevilapathy Registered User regular
    part 2

    lion-rampant-part-2-web-1.jpg

    Mustang thanks for the feedback, it is not a traditional comic format. i Like drawing a short story.

    Peace xx

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