The Gifted Path-would like some honest critiques.

CHILL

Hey this is CHILL, I'm new here so I want to say what's up to everybody first and foremost.

Also I was hoping I could get some good critiques for a comic I've started. It's only one chapter so far, but it's a big chapter (about 40+pgs including character bios). All I ask is that you keep it real and be honest. Here is the link:

tgp.thecomicseries.com/


Thanks in advance.

The Lovely Bastard

we're not gonna click on your site

if you want a critique, post the work here

CHILL

But it's 40 or so pages, you're saying I should post those many pages here?

m3nace

You should post those you want critique on.

CHILL

I want critique on the whole chapter...all of it.

squidbunny

Ramius wrote:

7 ) No Site-Whoring
Site-whoring, plugging, or advertising of your personal Website, product, or Webcomic any kind will not be tolerated. You can include a link to your site/gallery in your sig, but do not start a new thread simply directing people to your site.

We can give you critiques based on an excerpt; post a few pages at a time. If you're 40 pages in I doubt you'll be changing too much about this chapter, specifically, according to any feedback we offer, so there's very little need for us to see the entire thing, anyway, as I imagine you'll be applying said feedback to your work going forward.

Grifter

Squidbunny has the right idea. Please, post images directly in this thread.