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The Gifted Path-would like some honest critiques.

CHILLCHILL Registered User
edited July 2012 in Artist's Corner
Hey this is CHILL, I'm new here so I want to say what's up to everybody first and foremost.

Also I was hoping I could get some good critiques for a comic I've started. It's only one chapter so far, but it's a big chapter (about 40+pgs including character bios). All I ask is that you keep it real and be honest. Here is the link:

Thanks in advance.



  • The Lovely BastardThe Lovely Bastard Registered User regular
    we're not gonna click on your site

    if you want a critique, post the work here

  • CHILLCHILL Registered User
    But it's 40 or so pages, you're saying I should post those many pages here?

  • m3nacem3nace Registered User regular
    You should post those you want critique on.

  • CHILLCHILL Registered User
    I want critique on the whole chapter...all of it.

  • squidbunnysquidbunny Registered User regular
    Ramius wrote:

    7 ) No Site-Whoring
    Site-whoring, plugging, or advertising of your personal Website, product, or Webcomic any kind will not be tolerated. You can include a link to your site/gallery in your sig, but do not start a new thread simply directing people to your site.

    We can give you critiques based on an excerpt; post a few pages at a time. If you're 40 pages in I doubt you'll be changing too much about this chapter, specifically, according to any feedback we offer, so there's very little need for us to see the entire thing, anyway, as I imagine you'll be applying said feedback to your work going forward.

  • GrifterGrifter BermudaModerator mod
    Squidbunny has the right idea. Please, post images directly in this thread.

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