@toasticus Those sci-fi structures are pretty cool. When drawing buildings I can't seem to get away from rectangles, yours have a nice organic quality about them.
1, 5, and 6, all looks sweet @mynt
with the way the laces are blowing, i feel like this shoe was thrown like a football, and was spiralling clockwise before it landed safely in your mouth.
@toasticus Those sci-fi structures are pretty cool. When drawing buildings I can't seem to get away from rectangles, yours have a nice organic quality about them.
Thanks! I've always loved domes in architecture, and angles are cruise control for sci-fi.
Hey guys and gals, can I get a little critique on this? Is the panel structure good, should I do more detailed backgrounds yet or should I focus on anatomy more, is it weird that the characters are grayscale but the backgrounds are all white, etc.
Part of my decision not to do color and more detailed backgrounds is based on time, so I'm trying to work on my consistency and speed before focusing on those areas.
I feel like you could cut some panels, but i laughed, as well. And if it's sticking to a predetermined format size, I think the extra panels are fine.
Also, don't be fooled. It's takes only a SMALL amount of time to do minimal flats on a comic.
You could cut all but the last two panels and get the same comic. I think it'd be funnier even. A Hammerhead that's a lawyer is pretty funny, but a Hammerhead in a public bathroom in a suit for no stated reason is a bit more absurd.
Calling this one finished, I've been toiling away at it for ages and I'm ready to move on. Thanks a million to @angel_of_bacon for being super informative and helpful!
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with the way the laces are blowing, i feel like this shoe was thrown like a football, and was spiralling clockwise before it landed safely in your mouth.
Thanks! I've always loved domes in architecture, and angles are cruise control for sci-fi.
Anyway. Here's a Wendigo.
is it mynt flavored?
Doodle, concept of something that I started months ago and just about now got to finish:
Commissioned by a colleague of mine, a picture of his kids:
Doodle thing I'm probably never going to finish:
Hey guys and gals, can I get a little critique on this? Is the panel structure good, should I do more detailed backgrounds yet or should I focus on anatomy more, is it weird that the characters are grayscale but the backgrounds are all white, etc.
Part of my decision not to do color and more detailed backgrounds is based on time, so I'm trying to work on my consistency and speed before focusing on those areas.
i hope this critique helps.
Also, don't be fooled. It's takes only a SMALL amount of time to do minimal flats on a comic.
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You could cut all but the last two panels and get the same comic. I think it'd be funnier even. A Hammerhead that's a lawyer is pretty funny, but a Hammerhead in a public bathroom in a suit for no stated reason is a bit more absurd.
how does this make you feel?
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uh well it's really really heavy to the left
maybe make "art" a different color and bigger?
All warm and fuzzy.
The nose translates more as a lower lip or something. The dot in ".pl" is also very close to the p.
(and that IS a lower lip, so all is right in the goblin kingdom).
@seegru I love your linework, duderino.
EDIT: hmmm, mmmyesh
I feel like it's becoming too busy.
make the G shorter and dot the i with a plainer dot
Thanks, Brother!
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Calling this one finished, I've been toiling away at it for ages and I'm ready to move on. Thanks a million to @angel_of_bacon for being super informative and helpful!