i think i have something in my teeth

the_red_panda

see it... its riiiiight...here....

core tactic

Lol, this looks like a scene out of a hentai gone horribly wrong.

Corgi

Is this the result of eating those live little octopi?
Do they really grow in your stomach and force themselves out as adults or are those still myths?
:^:

YellowHerb

That's actually kinda hot. It's great how clean the lines are.

What I see wrong is how the saliva dribbles are acting. Like, it just happens to dribble down the dude's right side of his mouth. There should be strands everywhere going down his chin. And yes that means you'll have to mess up his goatee.

the_red_panda

yo soy el tenacle monster

Ehmavisca

You have a great style man, love it!

the_red_panda

thanks man

iceberg

Great line variation. The ear strikes me as flat/bland. Maybe add a bit more detail and throw some hatching in there? Maybe have the spit go straight down the face, but it works as is.

GurtPerk

Awesome pic, for starters. As stated before, you have a unique style and the line variation is very good. My question to you would be about your previous art experience, just as kind of a general statement to ask.

the_red_panda

thnx all for the comments

as for my past art experience. iv taken some community college art classes. you know, sit and draw for two hours and then some hippy lady comes by and tells you what a good job your doing without really giving any real critisim. nothing that really helped. iv also taken a life drawing class at the same CC, that class helped me get a handle on some skills. but other than that im pretty much self taught