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Pterror from the skies and a bird girl
beavotron
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hey figured I'd make my own thread cause I want some crits on this doodle I started that I kinda wanna finish
it's some little girl in a tribal bird costume
Really just want crits on the posing, positioning of the feets and you know...anatomy and junk that i suck at lols.
also I'll post this
me and cheerful bear made a comix lol!
he wrote it i doodled it
it's some little girl in a tribal bird costume
Really just want crits on the posing, positioning of the feets and you know...anatomy and junk that i suck at lols.
also I'll post this
me and cheerful bear made a comix lol!
he wrote it i doodled it
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The bird-girl thing looks fine anatomy-wise. For posing, it looks like where her butt would end is higher than her foot, which would mean she's way off-balance...unless she's got her other leg to balance her out - but we don't see that, so as it is right now it looks a bit off. You could either show her other leg on the ground behind her (she'd be kneeling on one knee, then) and that would look fine. You could also, perhaps, switch the placement of her arm and foot, and that would look more like she's balanced and center'd.
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