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Pterror from the skies and a bird girl

beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
edited May 2007 in Artist's Corner
hey figured I'd make my own thread cause I want some crits on this doodle I started that I kinda wanna finish

it's some little girl in a tribal bird costume
Really just want crits on the posing, positioning of the feets and you know...anatomy and junk that i suck at lols.

birdcostume.jpg

also I'll post this
me and cheerful bear made a comix lol!
he wrote it i doodled it
christmas-1.jpg

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  • NightDragonNightDragon 6th Grade Username Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    hahahaha...excellence.

    The bird-girl thing looks fine anatomy-wise. For posing, it looks like where her butt would end is higher than her foot, which would mean she's way off-balance...unless she's got her other leg to balance her out - but we don't see that, so as it is right now it looks a bit off. You could either show her other leg on the ground behind her (she'd be kneeling on one knee, then) and that would look fine. You could also, perhaps, switch the placement of her arm and foot, and that would look more like she's balanced and center'd.

    Yay for new threads! :D

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    hmmm switching leg and foot sounds promising, i will give that a shot ty Night

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    birdcostume-1.jpg

    the ol' switcheroooooo

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  • The One 52The One 52 Registered User
    edited May 2007
    Hahaha, brilliant. :lol: Poor dinosaur. But then again, he deserved it.

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  • bombardierbombardier Moderator mod
    edited May 2007
    Watch out Jim, he's packin' heat!

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  • EhmaviscaEhmavisca Registered User
    edited May 2007
    LOL AWESEOM

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  • Sam :)Sam :) Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Great design. The swithed hand and foot works much better. I imagine the character is "perched" on a tree branch up in a tree or something.

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