Alyce's Mediocre Sandwich

AlyceInWonderland

Here are several doodles that I flt were worth posting













Crits are welcome.

Projeck

This sandwich is actually quite delicious.

Zimarooski

I like your style and imaginative creations.

yume

I love the last one! ;3;

AlyceInWonderland

Thanks! I appreciate the compliments

AlyceInWonderland

Nothin' else? No crits?


*sigh* It's so lonely up in this joint.

Campion

I think that perhaps the shades of colours in your flesh tone could be a little more dynamic, and a little less plain shades of brown. They seem lifeless in contrast to your animated style. The colours you have on the crinkly last picture are good though, reds and blues, very lively.

Virum

If you want a crit....the best I can say is that in a couple of your drawings, the arms are slightly different lengths, or they are the same length, but the forearm is longer in one and the upper arm shorter than the other.

#2 and the drunk guy.

But maybe it's all optical illusion.

Really good work though, srsly.

HugmasterGeneral

I think you draw very nicely and have a grasp on several different styles.

I think my crit would center around the fabrics of the man's sleeves in the first picture. I like everything else about the picture, but as far as clothing goes, it will fall against the skin whenever possible, especially when gravity is pulling it. You have a strong understanding of folds, it just looks like his arm is wavy, distorting the fabric.

lyrium

In the first picture, the big man's hands look a bit small compared to his head. This could have been by choice, as it's a wacky picture, but it looks a little strange?
Overall though I like the picture. My favorites are the skeleton, the pandallama, and the drunken loch ness monster. Nice stuff!

AlyceInWonderland

Campion: You're absolutely right. I guess I'm just nervous about experimenting with my colors.

Virum: Will take note on the arm lengths. I didn't even notice it. thanks!

Ffilyaw: Bleh, you're right. Now all I see is a wavy arm. I'll be sure to pay more attention to where the fabrics land though. So, 'tanks!

Lyrium: Yeaaah, I have a tendency to make hands either too big or too small. Thanks for pointing it out though!

Talleyrand

Definently crack-a-lackin. It has actually reinspired me to continue pursuing different cartoon styles.

Novus

Mediocre... Lies! Dashing my ego upon the rocks like a cheap wine bottle after a drunken sojourn.

anable

I love that freaking YUM picture. That man knows delicious.

My single point is that he noses seems exaggerated in a lot of the pictures. It seems to be obvious (meaning I'm sure you're aware of it), but in several pictures it really drew away from the rest of the face and it was all I could stare at.

That being said, I definitely like the cartoon style you have. YUM!

Sammu

I love your style, still. Oh I remember the day's of your first posts here. Oh how you've improved.

EvilKidStevey

I laughed out loud to "freakin YUM"