So, this is a short comic for an audition for an art contest. The character is Jill (you know, jack and jill went up the hill, etc). The darkness beasty is the Big Bad Wolf, property of the guy running the tournament, who runs an awesome webcomic named Everafter. To enter you had to draw a character encountering Big Bad. Most people went with the intimidated approach.
No speech bubbles/grayscale yet, got one more day to finish this.
I need to clean this up but I'm really afraid of inking. I'll probably have to go in and nitpick with an eraser. What's a good way to get nice clean, thin lines? I have yet to find one.
Also, any general layout crits, etc, would be great. I'll post more as I finish it off.\
First page basically done
Only have about 1 hour to finish the rest, so I'm going to have to submit it only half done. ):