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A turtle and an egyptian woman

dj snyderdj snyder Registered User regular
edited August 2007 in Artist's Corner
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I know they are not much, but I am trying to get better! I know you guys always have good suggestions.

please don't be mean, though, or I will get punchy and defensive and make a fool of myself, and then lie awake at night.

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    EntrYEntrY Registered User regular
    edited August 2007
    The head/nose/face of the turtle looks flat. Probably due to light. I'm not exactly sure what to do, but try working around with shades and highlights.. You know, make it look rounder.

    I'm sure someone with actual skills can refraze that, so it'll be helpful.

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    Kewop DecamKewop Decam Registered User regular
    edited August 2007
    Am I the only one who finished the title of this thread off with "... walk into a bar"?

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    BedlamBedlam Registered User regular
    edited August 2007
    I really like the turtle picture. Youve really captured the harshness of the snow with the meaness of the soviet turtle.

    I dont like the egyptian woman much but mostly because she's not wearing a top. The styles of the foreground and the background dont really mesh well together either as it looks like they were done as two seperate pictures and then glued together.

    Otherwise great work!

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    dj snyderdj snyder Registered User regular
    edited August 2007
    Thanks for the compliments!
    Bedlam wrote: »
    I dont like the egyptian woman much but mostly because she's not wearing a top. The styles of the foreground and the background dont really mesh well together either as it looks like they were done as two seperate pictures and then glued together.

    The top thing was because it was drawn for a thread at the behest of the poster, I know what you mean :P

    I'll work on the background thing--it was sort of intentional but sort of not. D:

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