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EpiEpi Registered User regular
edited October 2007 in Artist's Corner
I finally started drawing again after an irritatingly long hiatus. I'll have some more stuff up later but I'd dig some crits on this for now.

facepostyl7.png

I've also been trying to figure out how to effectively use line thickness so if there's a sweet tutorial or some shindig out there I wouldn't mind a recommendation

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  • EpiEpi Registered User regular
    edited October 2007
    I'll take the lack of replies as a stunned silence.

    Here's a quick cartoon ish dealie I worked up.

    runcleanmc8.png

    Please at least give me some C&C on this one.

    I'm also thinking of making this the lines for my first attempt at photoshop coloring

    Cheers

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  • KilljoyKilljoy __BANNED USERS regular
    edited October 2007
    Hey it's like Aaron McGruder.

    The feet are tiny, one of the hands has an extra finger (not sure if that's unintentional), and try and get your lines a bit more open and your curves not looking as forced.

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  • EpiEpi Registered User regular
    edited October 2007
    Killjoy wrote: »
    Hey it's like Aaron McGruder.

    The feet are tiny, one of the hands has an extra finger (not sure if that's unintentional), and try and get your lines a bit more open and your curves not looking as forced.

    Haha, jesus. I knew something about that hand always bugged me. I can't believe something that obvious slipped by me.

    Curves for sure could be more fluid but what do you mean about getting my lines more open?

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  • EpiEpi Registered User regular
    edited October 2007
    Coupla more life drawings

    torsocleanne5.png

    fingersld6.png

    holdingkneebs7.png

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  • Creambun 007Creambun 007 Registered User regular
    edited October 2007
    put an NSFW tag in your thread title due to the above nudey nibblets.

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    Diggity.
  • EpiEpi Registered User regular
    edited October 2007
    Sorry on that

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  • lilchingch0nglilchingch0ng Registered User regular
    edited October 2007
    your proportions seem to go wonky alot more often then they go right. just keep that in mind when your doing more pieces. one thing that helps is taking a short break, smoke a cig or w/e but generally give your eyes some fresh perspective on what you were working on so you'll be able to catch the errors.

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  • PheezerPheezer Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited October 2007
    Those are some absurdly lopsided breasts. I'm sure there's some difference between left and right on the actual subject (assuming you have one here) but that's a lot more dramatic than you usually see.

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  • EpiEpi Registered User regular
    edited October 2007
    DrDizaster wrote: »
    Those are some absurdly lopsided breasts. I'm sure there's some difference between left and right on the actual subject (assuming you have one here) but that's a lot more dramatic than you usually see.

    You are very right. The model did have a distinct difference however I would appear I over emphasized them here. Thanks for the point

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