Critique wanted

arakasi

I've put up a blog at www.burningraindesign.com/fadein. I'd like some constructive criticism. Thank you.

bombardier

You might want to post some specific art because this is basically sitewhoring.

MKR

Stock WP theme, passable art.

I give it a something out of something.

arakasi

"You might want to post some specific art because this is basically sitewhoring."

Yeah I thought someone might say something like that. I'll remember for the future. Really, I just want to get better with Photoshop, I started out with no idea what I was doing, and still for the most part don't. and, by passable art, what exactly do you mean?

Thank you for your time, BTW.

MKR

It means exactly what it means, and you still haven't posted any art.

ScottEwen

Study anatomy. A lot.

Not just talking about your cartoony stuff, but this:

and this:

You've drawn muscles that don't exist and everything looks unconvincing.

arakasi

Thanks, man. There are some really talented people that post in this forum. That's why I came here. I've been reading posts here for a few years and finally got up the guts to post some stuff (online, anyway). I really just need to buckle down and practice, practice, practice. I'll keep posting my stuff for you guys to look at, and with enough time hopefully I'll get somewhere.

ScottEwen

Good response. If this forum had reputation points, I'd throw some your way.