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Art? ART! (Big stuff)

ScreamingGerbilScreamingGerbil Registered User regular
edited May 2008 in Artist's Corner
Here is some of my art:

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Not that much of an artist, but I like it :).

All drawn by hand and then photoshopped.

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Do.. you... want... crits?

    desperaterobots on
  • ScreamingGerbilScreamingGerbil Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Do.. you... want... crits?

    Sure, shoot away.

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  • GrifterGrifter title goes here 32, 64Moderator mod
    edited May 2008
  • ScreamingGerbilScreamingGerbil Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Thanks, I'll be sure to use these.

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  • bombardierbombardier Moderator Mod Emeritus
    edited May 2008
    Well if you enjoy art then that is a good start. However, if you want to really improve then you need to take a look at those links above. The drawing on the right side of the brain book will help you with doing studies from life and drawing what you see and properly visualizing subjects and not just drawing symbols and what you think you see. Getting away from the obvious anime/manga influence will also be a big step in helping you improve.

    From Grifter's link, check out the Loomis books. They are a very good base in learning how to build up the human figure from basic shapes and give your subjects volume. Also another suggestion that Bacon would agree with if you're going to be getting some books to help you would be The Natural Way to Draw.

    Those should provide you with enough information as a base and all you have to do is just practice, a lot of that being drawing from life.

    bombardier on
  • ScreamingGerbilScreamingGerbil Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    bombardier wrote: »
    Well if you enjoy art then that is a good start. However, if you want to really improve then you need to take a look at those links above. The drawing on the right side of the brain book will help you with doing studies from life and drawing what you see and properly visualizing subjects and not just drawing symbols and what you think you see. Getting away from the obvious anime/manga influence will also be a big step in helping you improve.

    From Grifter's link, check out the Loomis books. They are a very good base in learning how to build up the human figure from basic shapes and give your subjects volume. Also another suggestion that Bacon would agree with if you're going to be getting some books to help you would be The Natural Way to Draw.

    Those should provide you with enough information as a base and all you have to do is just practice, a lot of that being drawing from life.

    Ah, thanks for that! Just to let everyone know I'm not into drawing realistic or anatomically correct art. I'm more attracted to cartoons.

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  • MangoesMangoes Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    To draw good cartoons, you have to at least have a basic grasp of anatomy. This is all too often an excuse for newer artists.

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    Take that for example. If the artist didn't have a grasp of anatomy, they'd all be flailing blobs of goo.
    I cannot believe I just used Avatar for an illustration.

    I hate that show.

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    CapnMango wrote: »
    I cannot believe I just used Avatar for an illustration.

    I hate that show.

    That is because you secretly like it. You can't hate Avatar it is impossible.

    To ScreamingGerbil: You got a long way to go. Start from the basics and build up. You need practice on everything from anatomy to composition. At least you like art and are not being a dick about our criticism.

    Tam on
  • PROXPROX Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Hey yeah, let's hear it for gerbil who is a good sport about things!
    If you keep practicing the basics and searching for new techniques gerbil, you'll probably be as good as wakkawa in as little as 3 years. The main thing is to look for the answers to your questions.

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  • GodfatherGodfather Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    PROX wrote: »
    Hey yeah, let's hear it for gerbil who is a good sport about things!
    If you keep practicing the basics and searching for new techniques gerbil, you'll probably be as good as wakkawa in as little as 3 years. The main thing is to look for the answers to your questions.

    Woah now, let's not get carried away here.

    Maybe if he diligently practices day and night for at least four hours on traditional studies, sure, but not many people have that kind of dedication.

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  • Forbe!Forbe! Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    I totally love how you put asterisks in front of Attack, Special, Speed, and Will. Its like, its a mystery how powerful this dude is. I love mysteries!

    Seriously though, listen to Grifter and Bombardier.

    Forbe! on
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  • ScreamingGerbilScreamingGerbil Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    PROX wrote: »
    Hey yeah, let's hear it for gerbil who is a good sport about things!
    If you keep practicing the basics and searching for new techniques gerbil, you'll probably be as good as wakkawa in as little as 3 years. The main thing is to look for the answers to your questions.

    Thanks, I prefer not to be a complete dick when people give me a bad crit, one of the main reasons I posted this here is for an honest opinion. Thus helping me learn. People in DeviantART and my mom are too supportive to be honest.

    Anyway, If I don't succeed in art, I can always do smilies. Haha.



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    Forbe! wrote: »
    I totally love how you put asterisks in front of Attack, Special, Speed, and Will. Its like, its a mystery how powerful this dude is. I love mysteries!

    Seriously though, listen to Grifter and Bombardier.

    That wasnt my original Idea, its a meme in deviantart and I just wanted jo jump in the bandwagon. But hey, I'm glad you like it.

    And yeah I'm taking their advice.

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  • RavenshadowRavenshadow Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Ah, thanks for that! Just to let everyone know I'm not into drawing realistic or anatomically correct art. I'm more attracted to cartoons.

    That sounds... ominous...

    have you tried drawing realistically? I mean really tried? Its actually not as boring as it looks, its actually quite fun. As for drawing anatomically correct that's just kind of a silly thing to say. You need to know the form you're simplifying.

    Anyways, I'm not saying to spend all your time doing stuff you hate. But if you supplement your drawing practice with other types of art (reallism, painting, whatever) it will only make you a stronger artist. And who knows, you might find you like some other aspect of art better, or at least enough to keep doing it.

    Variety is the spice of life man.

    Good luck

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  • ScreamingGerbilScreamingGerbil Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Ah, thanks for that! Just to let everyone know I'm not into drawing realistic or anatomically correct art. I'm more attracted to cartoons.

    That sounds... ominous...

    have you tried drawing realistically? I mean really tried? Its actually not as boring as it looks, its actually quite fun. As for drawing anatomically correct that's just kind of a silly thing to say. You need to know the form you're simplifying.

    Anyways, I'm not saying to spend all your time doing stuff you hate. But if you supplement your drawing practice with other types of art (reallism, painting, whatever) it will only make you a stronger artist. And who knows, you might find you like some other aspect of art better, or at least enough to keep doing it.

    Variety is the spice of life man.

    Good luck


    Yeah I've tried it, Even with actual models. I made them cry. :(
    I keep trying, I don't like it but I know its important (to me at least).

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  • RavenshadowRavenshadow Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    you'll probably start to like it when you see a little progress in your work. (Nothing is more motivating than seeing your last pic is better than the one preceding it)

    keep tryin'

    Ravenshadow on
  • ProjeckProjeck Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Forbe! wrote: »
    I totally love how you put asterisks in front of Attack, Special, Speed, and Will. Its like, its a mystery how powerful this dude is. I love mysteries!

    Seriously though, listen to Grifter and Bombardier.

    i think they are like, tallies

    like each asterisk is a point

    so he has 3 attack points in whatever game he is playing

    Projeck on
  • BroloBrolo Broseidon Lord of the BroceanRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    First thing - step away from Photoshop. It's a wonderful program, but it can encourage some horrible habits for aspiring artists. Your drawing and illustration skills will be easier to focus on and improve if you limit your tools to just a pencil, eraser and a sketchbook.

    I know you're trying to get into cartooning, but strangely the fastest way to get good at that is to learn to draw realistically first. I cannot stress the importance of the Loomis books enough - Figure Drawing For All It's Worth is something you should print out and have in a binder for reference. Once you start getting a grasp for anatomy and features, you'll find it a lot easier to pick up on the really important bits of cartooning : exaggeration, expression, movement - the things you can manipulate to develop a real style for your own cartoons.

    Studying and drawing (and re-drawing, and re-drawing...) the human figure isn't the only way to improve your skills of course, but it is one of the fastest ways to get better. The good thing is that with realistic figure anatomy drawing it's always really easy to tell where you went wrong. If a hand or an elbow is put in the wrong place it will show up as an obvious error, and you'll quickly start seeing results as your eye improves.

    Brolo on
  • Forbe!Forbe! Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Projeck wrote: »

    i think they are like, tallies

    like each asterisk is a point

    so he has 3 attack points in whatever game he is playing

    I think you are like, tallies.

    Forbe! on
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  • ProjeckProjeck Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Forbe! wrote: »
    Projeck wrote: »

    i think they are like, tallies

    like each asterisk is a point

    so he has 3 attack points in whatever game he is playing

    I think you are like, tallies.

    damn sick burn

    Projeck on
  • MKRMKR Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    I'm going to second liking drawing from life as you improve. I hated it at first, but when every line I drew from life started looking better than the last, it was great.

    I still suck (been occupied with school), but it's nice to go and improve every time I put pencil to paper.

    MKR on
  • BroloBrolo Broseidon Lord of the BroceanRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Projeck wrote: »
    Forbe! wrote: »
    Projeck wrote: »

    i think they are like, tallies

    like each asterisk is a point

    so he has 3 attack points in whatever game he is playing

    I think you are like, tallies.

    damn sick burn

    pwned, bitch

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