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byronbyron Registered User regular
edited October 2006 in Artist's Corner
Hi all,
I am new here and I want to introduce myself. I am an avid comic fan and decided that I want to do it myself. I consider myself like a cross between penny arcade humor with Jim Davis art style. What do you think?
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    GrifterGrifter BermudaModerator mod
    edited October 2006
    Don't you have your own forum in which to post your shitty art?

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    CheerfulBearCheerfulBear Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    Hi byron! Welcome to the forum!

    First of all, I think you're off to a great start, but here are some fancy pointers:

    1) you need to work more on shading, most of what you've shown us lacks the subtle nuances of shading and lightwork, I think it will give your pictures the edge they deserve if you try to emboss most of the edges and maybe add some drop shadows

    2) I noticed you used the paint bucket fill tool to color your characters shirt, I think it would really give your picture the gravity it needs if you used a photoshop gradient filter

    i hope this helps you becase it think your on the right track,

    :wink:

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    ProspicienceProspicience The Raven King DenvemoloradoRegistered User regular
    edited October 2006
    I think you're laying, you're joind sayz lik 2005, thats not THAT new.

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    MetalbourneMetalbourne Inside a cluster b personalityRegistered User regular
    edited October 2006
    It's kinda backward. The humor is better than jim davis, but the art is better than penny arcade.

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    ProspicienceProspicience The Raven King DenvemoloradoRegistered User regular
    edited October 2006
    Hi byron! Welcome to the forum!

    First of all, I think you're off to a great start, but here are some fancy pointers:

    1) you need to work more on shading, most of what you've shown us lacks the subtle nuances of shading and lightwork, I think it will give your pictures the edge they deserve if you try to emboss most of the edges and maybe add some drop shadows

    2) I noticed you used the paint bucket fill tool to color your characters shirt, I think it would really give your picture the gravity it needs if you used a photoshop gradient filter

    i hope this helps you becase it think your on the right track,

    :wink:

    It's the horrible sound effects guy!

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    byronbyron Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    Hi byron! Welcome to the forum!

    First of all, I think you're off to a great start, but here are some fancy pointers:

    1) you need to work more on shading, most of what you've shown us lacks the subtle nuances of shading and lightwork, I think it will give your pictures the edge they deserve if you try to emboss most of the edges and maybe add some drop shadows

    2) I noticed you used the paint bucket fill tool to color your characters shirt, I think it would really give your picture the gravity it needs if you used a photoshop gradient filter

    i hope this helps you becase it think your on the right track,

    :wink:

    I don't have photoshop do you know where i can get a pirated copy of it for free? I like the sound of being able to make a gradation and maybe some other kool stuff.

    EDIT: I made a few changes what do you think?
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    EhmaviscaEhmavisca Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    I think.

    [spoiler:e3930b2c3e]Therefore, I am.[/spoiler:e3930b2c3e]

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    RavenshadowRavenshadow Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    byron wrote:
    I don't have photoshop do you know where i can get a pirated copy of it for free? I like the sound of being able to make a gradation and maybe some other kool stuff.

    EDIT: I made a few changes what do you think?
    snorecraft1.bmp

    what brush settings do you use? I can never get my lines as clean as yours

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    byronbyron Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    I get lots of questions about how to draw pretty well from my friends. I usually tell them to use the brush with the coolest colors.

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    CheerfulBearCheerfulBear Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    gj! 8)

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    NightDragonNightDragon 6th Grade Username Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    i was going to say u should use comic sans b/c it shluld b used in alot of comics but u alredy r so i think its a good comic but maybe u could also use a speach bubble b/c rite now u cant tell whose talking if its the boi or teh pot leaf ok

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    MetalbourneMetalbourne Inside a cluster b personalityRegistered User regular
    edited October 2006
    L9ROG LFG

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    byronbyron Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    I was thinking it would be funnier if maybe it was God talking. Notice I capitalize God when I spell it because I believe in Him and his Powers.

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    EhmaviscaEhmavisca Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    god.

    :twisted:

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    tynictynic PICNIC BADASS Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited October 2006
    god.

    :twisted:
    oh noes.

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    byronbyron Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    Laugh it up. Plenty of time to laugh when ur BURNING IN HELL FOREVER.

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    PokerPoker Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited October 2006
    Dewd! I wuld suck ur cok if u wuld draw something 4 me.

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    .Tripwire..Tripwire. Firman Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    byron wrote:
    snorecraft1.bmp

    :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll:
    :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll:
    :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll:

    Jesus fucking christ, I have no idea why everyone here isn't laying into you but this is the most horrible picture I've ever fucking seen. Get out of here with this fucking shit, it doesn't even have a fraction of a semblance of any fundamentals from which you can build.

    This is so fucking ridiculous. Jesus fucking ass twatomobile, mods lock this godamned thread for fucks sake.

    Here's some advice "byron", GO SHOOT YOURSELF IN THE FUCKING WRISTS because the only person who will like this faggot comic idea is your mother when she puts it on the family fridge you 11 year old cock slapshotter. Even still she won't like it as much as when I'm doing her in her bed (sexually) but that's besides the point which is stop spamming this forum and realize how much of a dickcheesed smegmatic douchechomper you are.

    When did the AC get to be such labia-lipped pussy queergaymosexuals?

    AND STOP DRAWING ON WHITE BACKGROUNDS IT'S THE ARTISTIC EQUIVALENT OF BEING AN EJACULATE COVERED RETARD



    jesus!

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    tynictynic PICNIC BADASS Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited October 2006
    You're just jealous, you big pansy.

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    multimoogmultimoog Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    byron wrote:
    Hi all,
    I am new here and I want to introduce myself. I am an avid comic fan and decided that I want to do it myself. I consider myself like a cross between penny arcade humor with Jim Davis art style. What do you think?
    snorecraft.bmp

    BUT WHAT HAPPENS IN THE NEXT EPISODE!!11!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    DeusfauxDeusfaux Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    .Tripwire. wrote:
    Jesus fucking christ, I have no idea why everyone here isn't laying into you

    maybe you should ask someone then before making a fool of yourself

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    master_shakemaster_shake Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    Deusfaux wrote:
    .Tripwire. wrote:
    Jesus fucking christ, I have no idea why everyone here isn't laying into you

    maybe you should ask someone then before making a fool of yourself

    As far as I know, Tripwire is impervious to self-fool-makings.

    I think...


    impervious.

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    tynictynic PICNIC BADASS Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited October 2006
    Deusfaux wrote:
    .Tripwire. wrote:
    Jesus fucking christ, I have no idea why everyone here isn't laying into you

    maybe you should ask someone then before making a fool of yourself

    Yeah, michael,
    what the hell were you thinking. Jeez.

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    supergluesuperglue Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    you know, I was expecting this to be a lame drawing, but you know what byron? You've done something unusual here.

    Your person has hands. Sort of.

    It's a rarity for first time posters. Congratulations.


    P.S. Tripwire. Byron has obviously put a lot of time and effort into this image, and we should take the time to admire it, and present some constructive criticism. Don't be so hard on him.

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    multimoogmultimoog Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    Plus the guy has green hair so you know he's hip and punk-rawk.

    Do you kids still say that anymore, 'rawk'?

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    MaydayMayday Cutting edge goblin tech Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    At least it's not VG humour, right?

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    InzignaInzigna Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    I, ah...

    Wow.

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    hunterbhunterb Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    tynic wrote:
    Deusfaux wrote:
    .Tripwire. wrote:
    Jesus fucking christ, I have no idea why everyone here isn't laying into you

    maybe you should ask someone then before making a fool of yourself

    Yeah, michael,
    what the hell were you thinking. Jeez.

    lololololo

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    Sir PeechizworthSir Peechizworth Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    hunterb wrote:
    tynic wrote:
    Deusfaux wrote:
    .Tripwire. wrote:
    Jesus fucking christ, I have no idea why everyone here isn't laying into you

    maybe you should ask someone then before making a fool of yourself

    Yeah, michael,
    what the hell were you thinking. Jeez.

    lololololo

    this fits oddly well with the tv show i just watched where unawares japanese folk walk into a pit for the sake of shadenfreude. Only they don't call it that because they're japanese

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    .Tripwire..Tripwire. Firman Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    Deusfaux wrote:
    .Tripwire. wrote:
    Jesus fucking christ, I have no idea why everyone here isn't laying into you

    maybe you should ask someone then before making a fool of yourself

    Boy, have I got egg on my face. You must have previous familiarity with this byron dude, while I was oblivious to his reputation and sort of flew off the handle because he was acting mockingly stupid.

    Sorry Deusfaux and everybody here, I should get better at detecting satire because I do look like a bit of a fool when I jump into a loop and act like I have the authoritative sensibilities in the matter.

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    tynictynic PICNIC BADASS Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited October 2006
    tynic wrote:
    Yeah, michael,
    what the hell were you thinking. Jeez.

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    RavenshadowRavenshadow Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    Inzigna wrote:
    I, ah...

    Wow.

    So you logged in, browsed to this thread, and hit reply just to post that intellectual abortion?

    Good job... fucknut

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    supergluesuperglue Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    Inzigna wrote:
    I, ah...

    Wow.

    So you logged in, browsed to this thread, and hit reply just to post that intellectual abortion?

    Good job... fucknut

    Could have been worse. Instead of just logging on, s/he could have signed up today, just to post that intellectual abortion.

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    RavenshadowRavenshadow Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    superglue wrote:
    Inzigna wrote:
    I, ah...

    Wow.

    So you logged in, browsed to this thread, and hit reply just to post that intellectual abortion?

    Good job... fucknut

    Could have been worse. Instead of just logging on, s/he could have signed up today, just to post that intellectual abortion.

    I suppose you're right.

    This thread should be changed to a flame Inzigna thread.

    Ok.... go....

    Inzigna how long did it take you to post that? Did you have to think about it for a while? Or were you just naturally gifted at being a useless twat?

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    GrifterGrifter BermudaModerator mod
    edited October 2006
    Deusfaux wrote:
    .Tripwire. wrote:
    Jesus fucking christ, I have no idea why everyone here isn't laying into you

    maybe you should ask someone then before making a fool of yourself

    I detect a hole being dug. Looks like it's about to get pretty deep too.

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    MetalbourneMetalbourne Inside a cluster b personalityRegistered User regular
    edited October 2006
    grifter81 wrote:
    Deusfaux wrote:
    .Tripwire. wrote:
    Jesus fucking christ, I have no idea why everyone here isn't laying into you

    maybe you should ask someone then before making a fool of yourself

    I detect a hole being dug. Looks like it's about to get pretty deep too.

    It's like stopping a guy from stabbing himself by shooting him.

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    MossMoss Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    Hi, I upgraded your drawing with these cool extrude and lensflare features.

    sodrawing.jpg

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    supergluesuperglue Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    OMG the lensflares are awesome! how did you make them? Did you draw them?

    I'm a pretty good drawer, but not as good as you.


    drawer-detail.jpg

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    Tweaked_Bat_Tweaked_Bat_ Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
    Where's the freaking difference clouds moss? Jesus, learn to fucking use Photoshop already.

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    byronbyron Registered User regular
    edited October 2006
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