Two worlds personal project

Shwag

Hey everyone, Kinda new here... Been lurking for years, finally think im getting good enough at developing my own style to actually start posting here! How ever i do not have alot of artistic friends and usually don't get much critique other than "Thats sweet man" or "Thats Freakin awesome". So now im working on this picture as a personal project.

This one is the first version of the project.. really wasnt feeling is, angles were messed up, and i drew it during a class.



I did yet another version of it, never finished it because i once again just was not feeling it. So this next picture is the third version of it, the latest scan i have of it.



So i hope you guys kinda see what im getting at, any critique would be great! Tell me how bad i am

NibCrom

They look interesting but at this point it doesn't seem like more than a doodle. Seems hard to critique. Your scan could use some cleaning up also. You could try scanning in black and white instead of grayscale or color. Maybe try developing it more.

earthwormadam

Ah, I didn't realize the second one was a work in progress. Looks good.

Shwag

Okay, so i finally got to a scanner, heres the latest version..
It does kinda feel like a doodle now, so either im going to redraw it on some poster paper or photo shop this one, after i finish it.

NibCrom

Boy, I tell ya just the cropping helps a whole bunch. Crop the left side a bit more and you'll be on the right track. Looks tons better!

D-Robe

I love the skull.

misosoup

is that a vagina, a blimp and a half eaten croissant in the top right hand corner?

spiffy

on a serious note, the cropping is a good idea, and it would be nice to see some experimental values put on this

Mustang

Hey yeah, it does look like a vagina.

Also Miso, is your avatar and sig ripped from the Eraser cover? If so, awsome, best album cover ever.*


*Best album cover according to personal preference, may not actually be the best album cover ever.

misosoup

glad you agree,

and yes, I also agree with you

and your disclaimer

r-jasper

well done AC! we'll find a penis or vagina in anything!

Shwag

long night, gate night and community centers do not go good together.......

i got some more done today, for the longest time i had no idea where this vagina was... untill i looked at the picture for a good 5 minutes.... then it hit me! haha, gonna have to see what i can do with that in photoshop tomorrow or something.




and ill give it a little flipp

vrempire

Boyyy, if it can be draw on the wall as a grafitti, I might stop by and adore the uniqueness
of the idea. Unfortunately, grafiitti cannot be flip-flop.

Good try Shwag

srsizzy

Interesting. As a finished work, it's really messy. I don't know how serious you are about other art, but it could use a lot of work if you wanted to take it further. Of course, doing it digitally would probably help with the messy marker quality. I have found few people who can master clean work with any sort of ink.