warlords of the air concepts

sketchy62

hi guys
for one of my assignments for class
we need to design a 2 vehicle, 2 character, and 1 environment
for this book called 'warlords of the air'

the theme is 'steampunk'

1- 25-50 thumbnails (silhouettes) for each final x5 = 125-250 thumbs
2- 3 refinements for each final (graphics, value, etc) = 15 refinements
3- 1 final for each = 5 completely rendered vehicle, character, environment

it is due on Dec.11.08
giving me a mere 3 weeks to work on.
on top of all my other classes.

ill be posting up my work and i was hoping that you can give me some critiques to help me finalize and finish this assignment strong.

thank you!

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wanted to explore poses that would fit the character i was designing


first refinement
character: Una Persson
sex: female
style: cool, confident

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more updates to come

Tam

That last girl's proportions are off quite a bit. Her head is way too small for that body. The position of her tattooed leg doesn't make much sense, the folds of her skirt indicate that the leg should be pushing against the right side of the skirt.

Also, I believe that anarchy symbol is trademarked or copyrighted or some such- would your instructor be okay with that?
edit: never mind, probably not.

hope that helps.

Nappuccino

Wait, the anarchy symbol is trademarked?

That's amazingly ironic.

edit: I'll say a little more later...

Tam

It's on all that clothing and such and it looks pretty commercialized, so I thought somebody had probably snatched by this point. I guess not. Whoops, disregard that then, sketchy.

Nappuccino

Well, i'm not sure if it is or not. Personally, I'd find it hilarious if it was

Godfather

Hey this is pretty cool.

I like cool things.

Nappuccino

one small comment (i swear, i'll take the time to give this a proper critque [or atleast, the best one I can do] when I get the chance... i'm just swamped w/ home work this weekend)

But, the grey under her right arm (our left) really shouldn't be in the picture. It makes her look much *ahem* bigger than she really is and it took me awhile to figure it out. But, like tam said, her head is much too small

Iruka

Personally, I think you could push the steampunk aspects of it, if shes supposed to be a pilot or something. Not that I'm not a fan of simple design, but you only get two characters, you may want to embody them slightly more with your theme. Other than her hat and I guess the watch, seems like pretty generic chick. This is just a suggestion though, you may be going for something rather subtle