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What is Bothering Carl?

astrospoonastrospoon Registered User new member
edited January 2009 in Artist's Corner
I'm getting close to finishing my interactive book product for kids, and I wanted to post a little taste of it to see what people think while I still have time to improve and change things.

http://vimeo.com/2617438

I'll post more info and art soon.

-Andy

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  • BroloBrolo Broseidon Lord of the BroceanRegistered User regular
    edited January 2009
    It looks good! The only complaint I'm having right now is with the singing, which just doesn't keep up with the quality of the visuals.

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  • NakedZerglingNakedZergling A more apocalyptic post apocalypse Portland OregonRegistered User regular
    edited January 2009
    this could be close to site whoring...

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  • NibCromNibCrom Registered User regular
    edited January 2009
    NakedZergling wrote: »
    this could be close to site whoring...

    Yeah, I think people would appreciate some art being posted here instead of just a link.

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  • bombardierbombardier Moderator Mod Emeritus
    edited January 2009
    It's a video. It's fine.

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  • JohnTWMJohnTWM Registered User regular
    edited January 2009
    yeah it's not like he linked to his site, just a video hosting site. Anyway, I liked the visuals, and I didn't actually take issue with the singing itself, I feel like the chorus could use some reworking, but I don't know that I can pick out exactly what is wrong with it. One thing I can pick out is the second voice that occasionally like.. backs up the lead. The timing is a little weird, it comes in really quick on the first voice and repeats it.. but it's either too fast or too slow on a couple of them, honestly I think I might cut it out until the last bit as the song ends, it actually works pretty well there, but the other times it chimes in tends to be more distracting than interesting.

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