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ThaBonerThaBoner Registered User
edited March 2009 in Artist's Corner
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8-) alright so me and my boy thought we'd get in on this webcomix game 8-)

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  • D-RobeD-Robe Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    It has a "Sweet Bro and Hella Jeff" feel, minus all the charm.

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    Cheese.
  • RubberACRubberAC Sidney BC!Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    Webcomic of the year

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    The rainbow glasses are a subtle touch

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    i seriously just laughed for like 10 minutes at this
    particularly at "who fuckin' farted"

    this smacks of S_O

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    My favorite is the twist that the "who fuckin farted" guy is also a psychic

    But how did this happen???

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  • TheBogTheBog Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    Who was phone?

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  • MagicToasterMagicToaster JapanRegistered User regular
    edited March 2009
    You need to make a new one.

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  • GoshingaGoshinga Registered User
    edited March 2009
    haha this is great.

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  • MustangMustang Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    The Rainbow gradient is the rolls royce of all gradients.

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  • FabricateFabricate __BANNED USERS
    edited March 2009
    This is fantastic

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  • ThaBonerThaBoner Registered User
    edited March 2009
    partyhard.jpg

    aw yeah

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    "boner police killed richard scary"

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  • bombardierbombardier Moderator mod
    edited March 2009
    Blatant ripoff of Cool Dude and Stoner Lou.

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  • MetalbourneMetalbourne Inside a cluster b personalityRegistered User regular
    edited March 2009
    I'm kinda wondering if it isn't S_O performing a social experiment with an alt to see if his comics would be just as funny without his name behind them.

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  • MustangMustang Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    Rape Camp Super Champ! Haha

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  • NotASenatorNotASenator Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    Try drawing from life and see if you can't vary your line weight more.

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  • KendeathwalkerKendeathwalker Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    I wish I wasnt laughing at this.

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  • NappuccinoNappuccino Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    I'm kinda wondering if it isn't S_O performing a social experiment with an alt to see if his comics would be just as funny without his name behind them.

    But S_O's name is funny so by proxy everything he does is funny.

    Yes, everything.


    That said, i think you're trying too hard to be offensive and random for your own good. Random =/= funny unless its done right (usually, when the reader can see where the links are.) I guess its possible that I'm missing something- other people seem to like it ... but who knows

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  • RubberACRubberAC Sidney BC!Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    That's pretty funny Nap, but I don't think you need to joke around in this thread. This guy is obviously looking for honest critique.
    Which he does not need, as he is one step above us on the art and humour level.

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  • TheBogTheBog Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    This comic is stupid! Your character expressions are awful and there's no consistency at all! Look. If you're gonna have the guy wear rainbow sunglasses in the last panel, at least show him putting them on prior. It makes things more dynamic! And why does the color scheme jump around so much? Why are the characters in black and white and the backgrounds some random color splotches? (sometimes) The backgrounds don't make any sense! Have them hanging out at someone's living room if you have to and talk about video games (not that Penny Arcade hasn't done that to death already! Geez!).

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    TheBog wrote: »
    This comic is stupid! Your character expressions are awful and there's no consistency at all! Look. If you're gonna have the guy wear rainbow sunglasses in the last panel, at least show him putting them on prior. It makes things more dynamic! And why does the color scheme jump around so much? Why are the characters in black and white and the backgrounds some random color splotches? (sometimes) The backgrounds don't make any sense! Have them hanging out at someone's living room if you have to and talk about video games (not that Penny Arcade hasn't done that to death already! Geez!).

    i think you're wrong
    about all of this
    because i laughed a lot at both of them
    and that's what webcomics are about

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  • TheBogTheBog Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    Webcomics shouldn't be about laughing. They need to be at least technically perfect.

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  • 2 Marcus 2 Ravens2 Marcus 2 Ravens Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    TheBog wrote: »
    Webcomics shouldn't be about laughing. They need to be at least technically perfect.

    Is this a joke post? I honestly can't tell.

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  • KalTorakKalTorak One way or another, they all end up in the Undercity.Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    TheBog wrote: »
    Webcomics shouldn't be about laughing. They need to be at least technically perfect.

    Is this a joke post? I honestly can't tell.

    This is what I'm thinking about every post in this thread.

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  • TheBogTheBog Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    Yes it's a joke.

    Subtlety is a lost art.

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  • bebarcebebarce Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    Cool dude and Stoner Lou would rape these mother fuckers with abortions.

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    TOKE DANK NUGZ

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  • RavenshadowRavenshadow Registered User
    edited March 2009
    TheBog wrote: »
    Yes it's a joke.

    Subtlety is a lost art.

    Nothing S_O does is subtle.

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  • ThaBonerThaBoner Registered User
    edited March 2009
    moongoon.jpg

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    shit dawg i'm so proud of your GED

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  • NotASenatorNotASenator Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    You know, I woke up this morning feeling like the world was a better place today, and now I know why.

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  • ThatDudeOverThereThatDudeOverThere Clock King Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    so this is what AC is all about

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  • MugginsMuggins Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    Hey TDOT wassup

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  • permadeadpermadead Registered User
    edited March 2009
    Those didn't make me laugh but I can't say they're "bad". just not my humor.

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  • D-RobeD-Robe Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    Not your humor?!

    You might not like it here.

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  • S_OS_O Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    Guys there is a palpable difference between this gentleman's work and mine. I don't "DO" alts.

    But this thread does look like a fine launching pad for the continued adventures of Sweet Bro and Hella Jeff.

    I wonder what they've been up to lately???

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  • S_OS_O Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    I'm kinda wondering if it isn't S_O performing a social experiment with an alt to see if his comics would be just as funny without his name behind them.

    Oh, also.

    Most of the time I hear people say, whoa, I didn't realize the guy who did XXXXX is the same guy who does YYYYY.

    Also, most of the time the word "Humanimals" appears somewhere in that sentence.

    So I don't know how much weight my name carries. It turns out most of the people who like my work don't even know who the fuck I am.

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  • D-RobeD-Robe Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    Hey, thats just what you get for being a modern day renaissance man. Maybe you should stop being such a jackoff all trades.

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    Cheese.
  • NotASenatorNotASenator Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    I hope that wasn't on purpose.

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  • D-RobeD-Robe Registered User regular
    edited March 2009
    NotACrook wrote: »
    I hope that wasn't on purpose.

    :winky:

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    Cheese.
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