MustangArbiter of Unpopular OpinionsRegistered Userregular
edited March 2009
The perspective on the base of the bowl is not matching up with the perspective on the rest of the bowl.
The face could also be redone, it seems like the least slickest part of the image, yet is the focal point, it looks a little rushed.
The rest of it is all thumbs up though. What's the plan for the frame in the back?
I don't know if it needs shading or not, but the perspective on the shelves could probably use some work. For example, the table is angled away from the viewer, yet the shelves and everything on it are dead on straight. The things on top of the shelf look like they're behind the edge, yet you can't see the underside of the roof of it.
earthwormadam - You can't actually see the underside of the shelves in the reference pic (or in real life). But I see what you mean and I think I can give them some more depth using some shading. Thanks!
Mustang - I'll see if I can fix the smile. I'm trying to make him look happy without being too happy. If that makes sense.
Sorry for another update so soon. I just wanted to "finish" it before the deadline. I'm gonna post it in the contest thread, but any last-minute comments are welcome.
My next project is gonna be drawing a bunch of robots, so I figured I'd draw "robots" from the AC. So far I have:
Scott Wegener
Beavotron
Slacktron
Six
desperaterobots
Nibcrom
Am I missing anyone else that has a robot name/avatar?
NotACrooktron
Would that mean I would have to roboticize Robert Downey Jr. without making him into Iron Man? I'm not saying I wouldn't be up for the challenge, I'm just curious as to what you have in mind. 8-)
Gah! I totally remembered you at one point, but forgot to right it on my post-it-note. Sorry! You're definitely on the list. If it makes you feel better, I drew you like two years ago.
And if my final art sucks you'll definitely have to do one. Buckwolfe, do you want to be part of this madness? I don't want to pressure any non-robots, but I don't want you to feel left out and cry in your room.
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BuckwolfeStarts With Them, Ends With UsRegistered Userregular
And if my final art sucks you'll definitely have to do one. Buckwolfe, do you want to be part of this madness? I don't want to pressure any non-robots, but I don't want you to feel left out and cry in your room.
*shudder!* I hate looking at my old art. Looking back on it, I sooo could have done better than that at the time. I feel ashamed...
Also, I think you are programed to be jealous of my ability to feel, and express emotion.
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The face could also be redone, it seems like the least slickest part of the image, yet is the focal point, it looks a little rushed.
The rest of it is all thumbs up though. What's the plan for the frame in the back?
What don't you like about the face? Is it the glasses?
The frame is gonna have an autographed photo of Mike and Jerry.
Do you think it needs shading? I was gonna add shading but I didn't want to make it too busy.
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and yes, getting the glasses right would make a big difference but the smile is also a bit wonky.
Mustang - I'll see if I can fix the smile. I'm trying to make him look happy without being too happy. If that makes sense.
My next project is gonna be drawing a bunch of robots, so I figured I'd draw "robots" from the AC. So far I have:
Scott Wegener
Beavotron
Slacktron
Six
desperaterobots
Nibcrom
Am I missing anyone else that has a robot name/avatar?
NotACrooktron
Would that mean I would have to roboticize Robert Downey Jr. without making him into Iron Man? I'm not saying I wouldn't be up for the challenge, I'm just curious as to what you have in mind. 8-)
Haha. I'm not sure if I've seen that before. If you are Liebot, who is Phillipe?
Tactical Anthropoid Machine
lol @ Tam. You've convinced me.
You don't even have a proper avatar! I guess I could come up with something.
How dare you sir. Do you have any idea how long it took me to do this? It isn't just a screen cap, cropped. It is 100% pure original pixel art.
My greatest apologies, sir.
But I think I do actually have a good idea for your robot.
Mustang...well that's a horse actually, but if I'm doing RobertDowneyJrBot how could I say no?
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I love how you draw Nibcrom!
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that's Sir Nappu-machine-o-bot to you.
Scott Wegener
Beavotron
Slacktron
Six
desperaterobots
Nibcrom
CyberMonkeytron3000
NotACrook
mully
Tam
D-Robe
Mustang
Angel_of_Bacon
Nappuccino
Crawdaddio
I'm gonna have to cap this list soon, the picture is getting crowded! Thanks to those who signed up, intentionally or not. :rotate:
I AM A MAN, DAMN YOU!
IF YOU ARE HEARING THIS, YOU ARE THE RESISTANCE!
John Conner, I mean NotACrook...you're out.
Not wait, you're in, I already have an idea for you.
Steam handle: Buckwolfe
I still have the one you did for me!
And if my final art sucks you'll definitely have to do one. Buckwolfe, do you want to be part of this madness? I don't want to pressure any non-robots, but I don't want you to feel left out and cry in your room.
*shudder!* I hate looking at my old art. Looking back on it, I sooo could have done better than that at the time. I feel ashamed...
Also, I think you are programed to be jealous of my ability to feel, and express emotion.
Steam handle: Buckwolfe
Haven't decided if I'm going to have a collage drawing or a fight scene.
That's awesome