The new forums will be named Coin Return (based on the most recent vote)! You can check on the status and timeline of the transition to the new forums here.
The Guiding Principles and New Rules document is now in effect.
The skin and hair textures look pretty good but, um... Her face is, well, horrifying; Her eyes are larger than her breasts which is, quite frankly, a rather impressive feat. Also, there's no shine in her eyes, which isn't helping counter the "soulless, implant-ridden gray alien hybrid" look.
I used an E-light-like script to create the falloff on the texture which deluded the shine off the eyes. I'll try to exclude the eye objects to a separate omni or spot.
Her eyes really really really freakin' bug me. That could also be the combination of her huge, super-angled, oddly-place eyes and her extremely thin, long nose that tapers at the nostrils.
The size of her boobs compared to the size of the rest of her also kind of bugs me.
Last on the bugging list is her thumb - it seems too long.
I am also not digging the design of the face, what with the college-regulation football sized eyes. It makes it look like an overtly sexualized and malproportioned version of a Bratz doll. :?
I realize it's a version of your comic character, but even there it's kind of ugly to look at. Throwing it in 3d makes it go from a to a .
Yeah, the eyes are a problem. She looks like one of those old ladies with too much plastic surgery whom always look surprised.
Also, the fact that you see her full iris dead center in the eyes makes her seem even more shocked. Perhaps she read the horrible comics ppl have been posting here recently.
And not that this has anything to do with what you posted *here*, but a suggestion for the animation - if the character is knowledgable enough to know the colloquial expression, "It's about damn time", I seriously doubt she'd not know how to form a proper introductory sentence: "I AM Jane Doe". It just didn't really fit for me.
Yeah so I agree with basically everything said so far. I also looked at your website and then I remembered this character from a thread you made before (you know, the horribly watermarked poster thread). Why didn't you take our advice about the character THEN, when you could have prevented a horrible character design NOW? And why did you post this up when you would have gotten the SAME exact response?
The classical definition of "crazy" is repeating the same process over and expecting different results, which would make you..... survey says.....?
I agree with ND... she seems to be speaking broken English at the beggening... but near the end her English becomes amazing. It doesn't sound natural.
Also, I don't like the tag 'It's About Damn Time'. It sounds very strong comming from someone you're just meeting. I don't want this girl talking to me like she knows me.
Not only that... but tags are meant to strengthen the services you offer. If you see BMWs, they are 'The ultimate driving machine'. You hear that, you think I'm gonna go for a drive. 'Its about damn time'... says, 'I have nothing to offer and I lack creativity'
EDIT: Scratch my last comments... upon looking at your web page I realize that being subtle is not your strong point. Also, you seem to be driving this page to 12 year old boys. You're doing a fine job
Jesus that lip syncing is so goddamned creepy. It's like it doesn't have anything to do with the rest of her, like those Conan O'Brian sketches where they have the mouth on a still photo cutout and superimpose some lips on it, or those godawful "thumb" movies. :x
Why did you make a 3d character if you're just gonna pose her straight on? You've got drawings of a side view, but no models. What are we critting? You posted this shit awhile back and we said the same thing then. Eyes too big, boobs too fake. Hands need work. I've seen this a million times. You need to be able to draw the human form before you can model it in 3D. And trim those toenails. Ugh.
Posts
Just in case we get horny, right?
Dear satan I wish for this or maybe some of this....oh and I'm a medium or a large.
I'll have nightmares now...
The size of her boobs compared to the size of the rest of her also kind of bugs me.
Last on the bugging list is her thumb - it seems too long.
I realize it's a version of your comic character, but even there it's kind of ugly to look at. Throwing it in 3d makes it go from a to a .
Twitter
Also, the fact that you see her full iris dead center in the eyes makes her seem even more shocked. Perhaps she read the horrible comics ppl have been posting here recently.
http://ray2kproduxions.com/3d_uni_animation.html
Yeah so I agree with basically everything said so far. I also looked at your website and then I remembered this character from a thread you made before (you know, the horribly watermarked poster thread). Why didn't you take our advice about the character THEN, when you could have prevented a horrible character design NOW? And why did you post this up when you would have gotten the SAME exact response?
The classical definition of "crazy" is repeating the same process over and expecting different results, which would make you..... survey says.....?
Separated at birth from this guy?
My digital art! http://forums.penny-arcade.com/showthread.php?t=8168
My pen and paper art! http://forums.penny-arcade.com/showthread.php?t=7462
Also, I don't like the tag 'It's About Damn Time'. It sounds very strong comming from someone you're just meeting. I don't want this girl talking to me like she knows me.
Not only that... but tags are meant to strengthen the services you offer. If you see BMWs, they are 'The ultimate driving machine'. You hear that, you think I'm gonna go for a drive. 'Its about damn time'... says, 'I have nothing to offer and I lack creativity'
EDIT: Scratch my last comments... upon looking at your web page I realize that being subtle is not your strong point. Also, you seem to be driving this page to 12 year old boys. You're doing a fine job
Seriously guys, you gotta see this!! (NSFW)
what is that strange liquid??
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
Jesus that lip syncing is so goddamned creepy. It's like it doesn't have anything to do with the rest of her, like those Conan O'Brian sketches where they have the mouth on a still photo cutout and superimpose some lips on it, or those godawful "thumb" movies. :x
Twitter
That uni animation was completely awesome. When she blinked [once I think], it scared me.