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any suggestions...other than the usal "kill your self" :?
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I think it's safe to say 'not really'.
Maybe spell the word 'like' correctly. And don't use photobackgrounds. And stop using paint. And study life. And use a pencil and paper. And that kind of stuff. I could say this all again but you never listen. You just keep posting the same MSpaint-jobs over and over again.
You aren't even trying.
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Other than the 'not really' quip, I wasn't trying to be a dick about anything. It's not 'different' or 'special', it's generic. I say this with a straight face, man, your comic is some of the most generic, poorly executed stuff I have seen here. A lot of people post comics here. Yours are the lowest quality I've seen. Why? Because you need to:
You keep coming back with the same crap, and it's always panned. And secretly you love it, or you wanted that reaction, or whatever you use to justify it. I don't care. I'm tired of you.
Please start trying.
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instead of trying to write funny jokes(which you fail at) why not improve your horribly disgusting art?
ditch ms paint and use a pencil
and i guess the whole emo kid thing is kind of like a joke now huh?
is your soul a twisted mass of darkness?
instead of pulling a crappy comic out of your ass in five minutes try actually spending time on your work
...unless you did spend a lot of time on this..which would be really sad.
My digital art! http://forums.penny-arcade.com/showthread.php?t=8168
My pen and paper art! http://forums.penny-arcade.com/showthread.php?t=7462
Now, I'm gunna lay this out for you - gunna lay it down. Why don't you - GASP - take some of the advice that's given to you, and - ZOMG - apply it to your comic? Or hell! Screw the comic! Show us some actual ART that isn't done in MS Paint. Or draw something and scan it in. Why don't you actually try to get better? Or would you rather waste your life away posting tripe on a forum that's tried to help you, despite the eye-melting qualities of your comic, and whose advice you've simply ignored?
And since when do policemen wear ties when on duty?
isn't that more of a night get up?
and why is he wearing red shoes?
are these clever mysteries to be solved in future comic strips?
the plot runs so thick!
I myself am trying to solve the mystery of "why the emo's feet are broken and facing backwards" case.
And someone run a check on Town hall's expenses! There must be some reason behind the cheapo white "P" sown into the cop's shirt pocket! Where have all the funds for police badges gone to?
My god,its like Davinci's code,this comic, the more you look at it, more questions arise.
My digital art! http://forums.penny-arcade.com/showthread.php?t=8168
My pen and paper art! http://forums.penny-arcade.com/showthread.php?t=7462
Shit like this is too obvious. "Can you help me bring out its full potential"
Show it to your mom. She'll realize the full potential so we don't have to.
XD thats fucking awesome!
Tell them to commit suicide. BE BRUTAL.
You clearly havent seen the other threads this guy has made
Why don't the mods just lock this thread and ban him for spamming then?
EDIT: Less for spamming, more for being a bell-end of a troll!
:^:
They should so make me a mod... muahahahahahaha!
... actually no, i think the power would go to my head.
He clearly doesn't follow the rules of this board, the advice to improve said art, and mainly just seem interested in just pissing everyone off.
I'm not one to usually pass judgement on people, but I think it'd be safe to say that no one here at the AC would argue against it if his ass was outta here.
no, you ass, it's not. it's incredibly unawesome, unfunny, and unclever.
that's not something that we're encouraging
Suggesting people kill themselves probably should be though.
Also, if all you have to contribute to a thread is quoting a previous post, don't bother.
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1.) Change the feet, they don't make any sense and look bad. (look at how real people stand and try to practice that.)
2.) Like other have said, don't copy and past panels. Don't use photo backgrounds.
3.) Seriously man, look at the text after you write it. "Hert"? I had to think before I realized it was supposed to be "hurt."
4.) Emo jokes like this are old and unoriginal.
5.) Use some photo-reference. Your cop is obviously a cop, but he doesn't look like a real one. Someone mentioned the 'P' sewn on, stuff like that.
6.) The last panel just sucks. The text bubble reaches out of the comic border, unlike the other ones, the dude running is not integrated into the photo background well at all. His top half is too high and his bottom half is too low.
7.) Generally speaking, cops have normal colored skin, not deathly white skin.
8.) It should be obvious enough that the dude in the back is the attacker. If you need those rediculous arrows and text that says "attacker", then you did something wrong.
9.) Practice drawing your faces so you don't need giant question marks to express confusion.
That's all I care to think about right now. Even if this was drawn really well, the joke pretty much sucks. I mean, maybe with creative angles, and well written text, and well done characters, and everything completely different ...then maybe the joke would be slightly amusing.
If you actually made this and are proud of it, do things different.