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Lookouts 2

IncomitatumIncomitatum Registered User new member
edited July 2009 in Artist's Corner
[This was not the place for this, I don't care about critiques as much as I do giving whiners something nice to look at]

Lookouts_2_by_incomitatum.jpg

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  • earthwormadamearthwormadam ancient crust Registered User regular
    edited July 2009
    I don't really know what to say. It looks better than a lot of the comics that are sometimes posted here.

    I just don't understand the point of essentially redoing a comic that already exists. It seems like your time would have been much better spent doing something original. It also seems like many of the more dynamic angles of the original comic have been replaced with more typical and bland panels. You've also gone a bit texture crazy for my tastes, and I usually like me some textures.

    Colors look pretty good though.

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  • ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
    edited July 2009
    yes, tone the textures down. make your text more readable, and bring something original. it'll be swell.

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited July 2009
    woah....the edit hahah

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  • LoomdunLoomdun Registered User regular
    edited July 2009
    your comic was pretty bad though, I saw it before you removed it, butttt since you don't want critiques I guess i'm free to just state that it was awful

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  • Stupid Mr Whoopsie NameStupid Mr Whoopsie Name Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited July 2009
    Just to be straight about this, there was nothing wrong with this comic, nor was there anything wrong with offering up crits for it--since that is what the AC is for, after all. Except you, Loom. You should know better than that!

    This was a good first effort, Incom. I hope you'll share and look for more critiques in the future.

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