Looks pretty great and has a nice flow, good work!
A little nitpick, but I couldn't exactly tell what was going on in the first couple "panels" until after two or three watches. Kind of hard to tell that it's supposed to be a small tent the fish-dude is coming out of...
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A little nitpick, but I couldn't exactly tell what was going on in the first couple "panels" until after two or three watches. Kind of hard to tell that it's supposed to be a small tent the fish-dude is coming out of...
Otherwise, props to ya!
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http://rhkstudios.iseenothing.com/ce_panel_3.swf
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