a man walked into my apartment, today. i didn't know him. neither did my roommate. he went through the apartment building trying doorknobs until we made him leave and then we called the police
a man walked into my apartment, today. i didn't know him. neither did my roommate. he went through the apartment building trying doorknobs until we made him leave and then we called the police
this happened a lot in the dorms when i was in college
you'd be surprised how many people just leave their shit open, I thought keeping your doors locked when you weren't around or otherwise occupied was the standard
Lesson learnt: dont get too involved in a friend's relationship problems when you're already missing your significant other incredibly. I need to fucking sleep this shit off.
Ya, I know nothing as well.. would probably be like "Yup, that looks like poetry to me, good work"
But if they're asking people who know poetry (and are trying to get better) I imagine it'd be nice to get some constructive criticism..
I write the shittiest shit. Its why I don't write anymore.
I write worse shit than yours I guarantee.
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edited January 2011
yeah what seems to happen is that they are nice and then people are nice back and it's this neverending circle-jerk and meanwhile nobody is commenting on my fucking poem because i haven't sucked enough proverbial dicks yet because i can't get my fucking gag reflex to chill out and it's all i can do to run away before i start barfing all over their shitty poems
yeah what seems to happen is that they are nice and then people are nice back and it's this neverending circle-jerk and meanwhile nobody is commenting on my fucking poem because i haven't sucked enough proverbial dicks yet because i can't get my fucking gag reflex to chill out and it's all i can do to run away before i start barfing all over their shitty poems
yeah what seems to happen is that they are nice and then people are nice back and it's this neverending circle-jerk and meanwhile nobody is commenting on my fucking poem because i haven't sucked enough proverbial dicks yet because i can't get my fucking gag reflex to chill out and it's all i can do to run away before i start barfing all over their shitty poems
Oh yeah one of those places
Fuck those places
Like Facebook
I've had people beg me to comment and like their picture or get annoyed at me if I see them face to face and go "Hey I liked that picture." "Oh, why didn't you comment then?"
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I want to do with you
What spring does with the cherry trees.
yeah what seems to happen is that they are nice and then people are nice back and it's this neverending circle-jerk and meanwhile nobody is commenting on my fucking poem because i haven't sucked enough proverbial dicks yet because i can't get my fucking gag reflex to chill out and it's all i can do to run away before i start barfing all over their shitty poems
Oh yeah one of those places
Fuck those places
Like Facebook
I've had people beg me to comment and like their picture or get annoyed at me if I see them face to face and go "Hey I liked that picture." "Oh, why didn't you comment then?"
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a man walked into my apartment, today. i didn't know him. neither did my roommate. he went through the apartment building trying doorknobs until we made him leave and then we called the police
what's up
this happened a lot in the dorms when i was in college
you'd be surprised how many people just leave their shit open, I thought keeping your doors locked when you weren't around or otherwise occupied was the standard
If you're going to have what sounds like the wildest sex ever either get a quieter bed or stop doing it at 6AM.
Sincerely,
Your neighbor who likes to sleep through the night
we went karaokeing tonight
i drank a lot
cathy drank one drink less than me and still ended up barfing
i haven't barfed yet
i sang a lita ford song
(kiss me deadly)
i also sang a lot of other stuff i've never done before
but i'm most proud of that one
i don't really remember a whole bunch honestly
i did cook a pretty sweet steak when we got home though
so your night sounds pretty awesome
i found five bucks so i'm going to go have some greasy fucking food
teeheehee
it cost me six dollars
the lesson here kids is don't go drinking wiht whippy
she will drink you under the table
Satans..... hints.....
I need to chill in Seattle evidently
Except with alcohol and PAX instead of religious observance
Talk about cool stories, bros!
I once owned a dachshund and she ate some chocolate covered cherries we had gotten my grandmother for Christmas.
She was lucky she lived, but our house was a mess for a day or so.
Wait that wasn't a cool story at all, that was kinda gross.
I got to talk to my ex again last night for a good while.
Our corgi once got into a bag full of free samples of candy and pills and stuff.
Most expensive free bag of stuff ever.
Another dog fact:
Gus (one of mongooses's mom's dogs) has gotten Giardia 4 times now.
Keep thinking he will learn but I guess not.
i am on people's blogs reading all this poetry that is getting nice comments and all i can think is "THIS IS SO SHITTY WHY IS EVERYONE BEING NICE OMG"
i must have no fucking idea what good poetry is
it must be the opposite of what i think is good
But I suppose I would be nice to a friend if they wanted me to read some.
But if they're asking people who know poetry (and are trying to get better) I imagine it'd be nice to get some constructive criticism..
Welcome to my world Quoth
The best thing to do is just assume you are right
After a while you start to realise that it doesn't really matter anyway
Or maybe they're just nice.
What spring does with the cherry trees.
I write worse shit than yours I guarantee.
What spring does with the cherry trees.
Oh yeah one of those places
Fuck those places
This is actually why the internet can be such a shit hole.
No the internet can be such as shithole because other people won't accept that I am right
Like Facebook
I've had people beg me to comment and like their picture or get annoyed at me if I see them face to face and go "Hey I liked that picture." "Oh, why didn't you comment then?"
What spring does with the cherry trees.
doesn't
matter
Get less-stupid friends.