New Artist on Penny Arcade Looking for Critique

ordomaliticusordomaliticus Registered User
edited March 2010 in Artist's Corner
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  • NibCromNibCrom Registered User regular
    edited March 2010
    Make these images smaller please. I can't even see the whole thing at 1920 x 1080.

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  • PeterAndCompanyPeterAndCompany Registered User
    edited March 2010
    NibCrom wrote: »
    Make these images smaller please. I can't even see the whole thing at 1920 x 1080.

    Ditto. My poor 9" netbook is crying in a fetal position right now.

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  • ordomaliticusordomaliticus Registered User
    edited March 2010
    Sorry about that. I hope this resizing helps.

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  • NibCromNibCrom Registered User regular
    edited March 2010
    The third one has some interesting things going on. The dots on the "i's" are interacting with the lines above them which at first made me think that I was looking at one of those "words that look the same upside down and right side up" sort of thing.
    The first two are interesting as well. I just can't think of what to say. Sorry this critique sucks, I'm so tired.

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  • SurfpossumSurfpossum A nonentity trying to preserve the anonymity he so richly deserves.Registered User regular
    edited March 2010
    Pretty sure it's "gunfire in the street", unless you intentionally changed it. I also suspect that you want "and it's", but without context I can't be certain.

    That's basically all I've got, yeah. Neat to look at, though.

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  • ordomaliticusordomaliticus Registered User
    edited March 2010
    Surfpossum wrote: »
    Pretty sure it's "gunfire in the street", unless you intentionally changed it. I also suspect that you want "and it's", but without context I can't be certain.

    That's basically all I've got, yeah. Neat to look at, though.

    I intentionally sometimes have to change the words to make the fit in such a confined space but thank you anyway.

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