The third one has some interesting things going on. The dots on the "i's" are interacting with the lines above them which at first made me think that I was looking at one of those "words that look the same upside down and right side up" sort of thing.
The first two are interesting as well. I just can't think of what to say. Sorry this critique sucks, I'm so tired.
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SurfpossumA nonentitytrying to preserve the anonymity he so richly deserves.Registered Userregular
edited March 2010
Pretty sure it's "gunfire in the street", unless you intentionally changed it. I also suspect that you want "and it's", but without context I can't be certain.
That's basically all I've got, yeah. Neat to look at, though.
Pretty sure it's "gunfire in the street", unless you intentionally changed it. I also suspect that you want "and it's", but without context I can't be certain.
That's basically all I've got, yeah. Neat to look at, though.
I intentionally sometimes have to change the words to make the fit in such a confined space but thank you anyway.
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Ditto. My poor 9" netbook is crying in a fetal position right now.
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That's basically all I've got, yeah. Neat to look at, though.
I intentionally sometimes have to change the words to make the fit in such a confined space but thank you anyway.