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Slim Fug; Concept/Portfolio-building [Other stuff NSFW]

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  • Spectre-xSpectre-x Rating: AWESOME YESRegistered User regular
    edited July 2010
    I am liking how that looks!

    As far as composition goes, maybe move him a bit more to the left so the hand doesn't almost disappear off-screan, or add some stuff on the left so it's a bit more balanced. I'm not the best at composition myself, but I think I'd like a bit more space between the hand and the edge of the thing.

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    Inks!

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  • Spectre-xSpectre-x Rating: AWESOME YESRegistered User regular
    edited July 2010
    Yes.

    This is what I want.

    Yes.

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    That is so Iruka

    sort of

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    Haha yesssss I was thinking of her Incubus shirt basically the whole time

    Also I don't have nearly as much practice drawing cool feathers

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  • McGibsMcGibs TorontoRegistered User regular
    edited July 2010
    I need to work on creating a simplified comic style.
    So I'm totally going to rip you off.

    Just a heads up.

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    It's cool bro just copy Mike Mignola and Michael Oeming and you're pretty much there

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  • F87F87 So Say We All Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    Yay! Fug that is fuggin cool.

    Go go go!

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  • bombardierbombardier Moderator Mod Emeritus
    edited July 2010
    That reminds me of that led-pencil guy that used to post here for some reason. The subject matter, anyways.

    Still I think you should keep drawing and never stop!

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
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    I'm trying to draw every day, since I'm going to be starting a pretty strict "drawing-a-day" regimen pretty soon.

    I'm pretty pumped about it!

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  • MustangMustang Arbiter of Unpopular Opinions Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    Murderer!

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  • PROXPROX Registered User regular
    edited July 2010
    Fug you are the bee's knees.

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Ohi art thread. Aside from knocking my internet out for a week moving also sapped a lot of my drawing energy, but here is a dump.

    Cicada studies, brutally asphyxiated by me personally
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    Basement environment study, worked on until I got severely bored
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    EgyptianCowboy.png

    More studies. Photo-references are fucking awful and I hate them always
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    WitchesbeBitches.png

    And some digital stuff I found myself doing when I wasn't unpacking boxes/passing out. Mostly done because I am horribly out of practice with all-digital work.

    BikerIGuess.png

    FuckLegs.png

    2am.png

    And because I was hideously bored and seriously out of ideas for what to draw.

    I think I need to invest in some good drawing texts, because I can see myself running out of drawing models extremely quickly and need to study up on musculature and anatomy.

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  • Spectre-xSpectre-x Rating: AWESOME YESRegistered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Fugitive wrote: »
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    I recognized the quote and the filename confirmed my suspicions. Nice!


    I keep loving your stuff. It's got a shit ton of personality, always. ALWAYS. I also like the colours on the bike guy. I am big fan of clashing colours, actually.

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  • NakedZerglingNakedZergling A more apocalyptic post apocalypse Portland OregonRegistered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Fugitive wrote: »
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    I'm trying to draw every day, since I'm going to be starting a pretty strict "drawing-a-day" regimen pretty soon.

    I'm pretty pumped about it!

    OMG i laughed so hard at this. BRAVO.

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  • .Tripwire..Tripwire. Firman Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Fug drawing is always a great thing.

    I like the last two images especially (or three including the MSPA art)

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  • BelruelBelruel NARUTO FUCKS Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Fugitive wrote: »

    More comic
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    I need to figure out a way to draw straight lines that don't look fucking awful. I think I might just have to start using a straight edge for most of them.

    I didn't know you did this comic! someone posted it somewhere on here (prolly in the webcomics thread) and it just made me laugh and laugh so much I had to save it.

    I'm a big fan fug!

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    I am a big fan of witch girl

    except for her head which seems small for her body

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  • ParadiseParadise Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Fugitive wrote: »
    Inks!

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    :D ^Please color this.


    In general, your style is pleasing to look at, but you'd do better to push the foreshortening in your drawings (I'm thinking the thickness of their limbs, specifically).

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  • HugmasterGeneralHugmasterGeneral Poopmaster General YobuttRegistered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Fugitive wrote: »
    More comic
    TrueLove.png

    I need to figure out a way to draw straight lines that don't look fucking awful. I think I might just have to start using a straight edge for most of them.

    I normally hate web comics (I don't even like mine!) But I could not stop laughing at this one. Holy crap it's so funny.

    I'm going to look stupid here, but are you the one who draws the round white people of Perry Bible Fellowship?

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Haha, no, I'm not Nick Gurewitch, it was just a dumb edit. And thank you.

    SpexXx: h5. I am listening to Electric Six pretty much constantly now, so there is just going to be nothing but coded references from here on out.

    Bel: Ohshit! I feel like I would have seen that since I stalk that thread fairly religiously. It must have been hidden under some Mega Tokyo. But I'm glad you like it! I'll try doing more.

    Tam: Yeah, her noggin is in dire need of some upsizing. I am in a constant battle of trying to internalize proper proportions and I almost always miss the dumbest things until it's too late.

    Paradise: Yeah, I'm doing what I can to push more dynamic compositions in my work. I always end up being so timid when it comes to action shots, but I think working digitally is starting to free some of that up, since Ctrl-Z makes it pretty low risk to really play around.

    Alla resta y'alls: Thanks you!!

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Are you sketching the head and the hair at the same time? That leads me astray, so I sketch the head first and then add the hair.

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    That might be the issue, because I usually only block in the face before I go nuts on the hair.

    It's weird, because whenever I do figure drawing I almost always make the head too big, or the shoulders too narrow.

    Huurgh people are hard!

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Hey so I didn't want to wait to post this in an art dump, because I actually want specific critique on it!

    Digital inks

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    And some colors

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    Tips on the coloring and lighting especially would be appreciated.

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  • Angel_of_BaconAngel_of_Bacon Moderator Mod Emeritus
    edited August 2010
    Hmm, you might want to give me some direction on where you want help with the lighting/coloring, because before you put my name in the thread title I was like, "well, looks pretty good!" and just leave you to just go ahead and finish it. I mean, I could do my usual dash of speedpaintover, but it would be probably be fairly inappropriate to the style you are aiming for.

    I guess I'll try to dredge up some nitpicks:

    -Lines of red on the fingers, breast, rib, and shoulder fold can probably be eliminated, if the light is coming at all from behind as it looks like, these things wouldn't be lit by that source.
    -A triangle of red on the left side of the nose could help the form a bit there.
    -You might want to push the lighting over a bit on the abs so you don't have such a major break occurring straight down the center line. Most people don't have any sort of edge there, so using a spot such as the side of the abs and the obliques to turn the form is usually a better option.
    -The collar should be casting a shadow.
    -The background- Hard to give much advice until it's a little more finished, but at the moment I'd say I'm not sure if trying to paint rather than ink and color is the best design choice. I mean, if you're looking to broaden your painting skills and such go for it, and I can help you out with that (hint#1 is to use soft brushes for those kinda glow lights), but I wonder if rendering a bunch of stuff out is going to look incongruent with the character, and risks loosing the design sense that makes your work so fun to look at.

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  • NightDragonNightDragon 6th Grade Username Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Nice things you got hurr, Fug

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  • Atom JamesAtom James Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Your stuff is fuggin' fantastic!!!!111one

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    Life isn’t divided into genres. It’s a horrifying, romantic, tragic, comical, science-fiction cowboy detective novel … with a bit of pornography if you're lucky.

    -Alan Moore
  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Hmm, you might want to give me some direction on where you want help with the lighting/coloring, because before you put my name in the thread title I was like, "well, looks pretty good!" and just leave you to just go ahead and finish it. I mean, I could do my usual dash of speedpaintover, but it would be probably be fairly inappropriate to the style you are aiming for.

    I guess I'll try to dredge up some nitpicks:

    -Lines of red on the fingers, breast, rib, and shoulder fold can probably be eliminated, if the light is coming at all from behind as it looks like, these things wouldn't be lit by that source.
    -A triangle of red on the left side of the nose could help the form a bit there.
    -You might want to push the lighting over a bit on the abs so you don't have such a major break occurring straight down the center line. Most people don't have any sort of edge there, so using a spot such as the side of the abs and the obliques to turn the form is usually a better option.
    -The collar should be casting a shadow.
    -The background- Hard to give much advice until it's a little more finished, but at the moment I'd say I'm not sure if trying to paint rather than ink and color is the best design choice. I mean, if you're looking to broaden your painting skills and such go for it, and I can help you out with that (hint#1 is to use soft brushes for those kinda glow lights), but I wonder if rendering a bunch of stuff out is going to look incongruent with the character, and risks loosing the design sense that makes your work so fun to look at.

    Well, I suppose I was just being paranoid that I was breaking some sort of lighting rules, or making a bunch of stupid mistakes and decisions. I'll try not to light the Bacon signal unless it's an actual emergency next time.

    I am trying to improve my digital rendering skills, since I really know how to do little outside of the basic cell-style shading I tend to lean on. I'm not really looking for that to become my aesthetic focus, but I know it would be a useful tool to have in my arsenal. I think I got carried away on this one, though, since the line art really is more suited for a simpler style of rendering.

    I feel kind of adrift in terms of digital painting, though. I can find tutorials for color and lighting, but I haven't been able to find good resources to tell me which brushes I should use for what, so I pretty much just lean on the round brush with varying levels of opacity.

    Also thanks ND and Atom.

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Update

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
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    Yeah I do not get this whole digital painting deal. Reference is here

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    Also, as some of you may know I've started a 365 day art routine as a way of (hopefully) dramatically improving my skills, and I've set up a Blogger account to catalog this. Nothing hugely fancy, just kind of something to keep it all in one place. It will have maybe 90% overlap with this thread, but it's there.

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  • MabelmaMabelma Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Following you, I love that comic. The cats are really fat and... It's so Fluffy!!! Also you should try this out, http://www.atomictoy.org/365dudes/ I would love to see 365 dudes in your style.

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  • PROXPROX Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Bro, you are doing really good bro. I am digging your blog.

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  • Spectre-xSpectre-x Rating: AWESOME YESRegistered User regular
    edited August 2010
    I, too, love those cats. Their disdain is almost tangible.

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  • earthwormadamearthwormadam ancient crust Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Ya know, deep down I knew Inception was missing somethin, but I couldn't put it together until just now.

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  • ParadiseParadise Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Fugitive wrote: »
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    Hahaha! Fug, we're on the same wavelength. It bugged the crap out of me that there were no pop culture references in Inception (especially no power fantasies).

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  • MustangMustang Arbiter of Unpopular Opinions Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Hahaha :^:

    I love lucid dreaming, it's awesome......but you forgot the "everyone wants to have sex with me" panel.

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  • farbekriegfarbekrieg Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    you are a duck, you are a beaver, you cant make up your mind and people find that sessy? I cant make up my mind and people call me a slacker... damn your fur covered duck billed body

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  • HugmasterGeneralHugmasterGeneral Poopmaster General YobuttRegistered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Wow, you're so amazing. I wish I could take your skill to draw my graphic novel. I'm waiting until I get to your level before I even bother. How long did it take you to draw 'Dream Big' after you figured out your dialog and panel flow? (By that I mean, just your lines and shading to production)

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    Mabelma wrote: »
    Following you, I love that comic. The cats are really fat and... It's so Fluffy!!! Also you should try this out, http://www.atomictoy.org/365dudes/ I would love to see 365 dudes in your style.

    Some would argue that endeavor would be highly redundant heyo self burn!

    Also thanks everyone else. And if anybody has an digital painting tips I would really appreciate it. The black and white photo-reffed piece was pretty tumultuous.

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited August 2010
    rfilyaw wrote: »
    Wow, you're so amazing. I wish I could take your skill to draw my graphic novel. I'm waiting until I get to your level before I even bother. How long did it take you to draw 'Dream Big' after you figured out your dialog and panel flow? (By that I mean, just your lines and shading to production)

    BLUG! Sorry I must have missed this while I was posting!

    Dream Big took maybe a minute to thumbnail (after I kind of ran it through my head a couple times while at work), probably two and a half to three hours to draw/ink, then maybe another hour to scan and "color". It probably took me a bit longer than usual because I kind of lingered on the background in panel 3.

    AUGH DIGITAL PAINTING HEEELP!

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    Reference here.

    I am completely adrift. I have no idea what brushes I should be using or what settings or anything. I just blocked it in with a round brush and then tried to do gradients with fading, then I tried using a soft brush and it just made everything look all airbrushy and velvet painting-esque.

    Emergency! Please help?

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