ROUND ONE: CAP AND LAYLA VS. DEADBEATS
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TEAM CAPTAIN AMERICA (blankspace/anjin-san) (Skrull-o-Rama!)
script to be posted later!
TEAM LAYLA MILLER (balefuego/nogs) (Attacks on Mars!)
THEY BOTH WIN! BUT WHO DO YOU THINK WINS MORE?
(this means both team Cap and team Layla will get a win in the standings, I just wanted to make a thread)
script to be posted later!
TEAM LAYLA MILLER (balefuego/nogs) (Attacks on Mars!)
THEY BOTH WIN! BUT WHO DO YOU THINK WINS MORE?
(this means both team Cap and team Layla will get a win in the standings, I just wanted to make a thread)
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Cap's eyebrow is cocked again.
SECOND ROW/ FRAME TWO
Frank also suspiciously looks at Cap.
THIRD ROW / WIDE PANEL
Cap and Frank are furiously tugging on their own faces. Their eyes are closed and this shit looks sort of painful.
6 page comic.
"ARISE"
Page 1:
Three frames for the top row. The middle is a splash dropping over the bottom row. The bottom row has two frames.
TOP ROW/FRAME 1:
There should be a depiction of the ocean at night with stars and shit, with water and whatnot.
Caption Box At Bottom of Frame - "Into the arms of death he fell, casting a shadow over our lives...
TOP ROW/FRAME 2:
A hand is splashes out of the water. Actually, it's a glove. A very familiar glove.
Caption Box At Bottom of Frame - "His days of justice, honor and glory ended with tears in our eyes..."
TOP ROW/FRAME 3:
We can now see a figure swimming to a non-descript island from a great distance.
Caption Box At Bottom of Frame - "His deeds so great, his love so deep and deserves one last reprise."
SPLASH FRAME:
Captain fucking America is on his hands and knees crawling forward on an angle that clearly lets the reader see it's Captain America. His left hand is partially obscured by the second frame and his pinky and ring finger are where the third frame would be.
Caption Box At Bottom of Frame - "A battle to be won, dear fallen son. Your destiny. Arise."
PAGE #2
7 panels in total.
3 Rows.
The first is a wideframe panel on the top row.
The other two rows are three panel as usual. (I'm thinking along the lines of Fell's format. Brief and shit.)
TOP ROW/WIDE PANEL:
Captain America stands up. The "camera" is aimed behind him. He stands on the beach amidst a jungle island. There are rocks and trees and shit to his left and right to drive home the fact the place is massive in comparison to him.
MIDDLE ROW/FRAME ONE:
Cap is parallel to the reader, running through the bushes and shrubbery. His whole body is in view. (He's carrying the shield.)
MIDDLE ROW/ FRAME TWO:
The "Camera" is now on the upper half of Cap's face. His eyebrows twist into that great angry/determined look that defined him all those years.
MIDDLE ROW/ FRAME THREE:
We again see all of Cap's body, as he does a very cartoony stop. His feet do a little skoooooch noise and he abrupty stops. There is a scream noise in big letters over the panel.
BOTTOM ROW/ FRAME ONE:
For Cap's inner monologue there should be a tiny shield with the star to let you know this is him thinking.
Cap is squinting, his left eyebrow cocked.
CAP'S MIND : "Where am I? Was that Carol?"
BOTTOM ROW/FRAME TWO:
We're in a first person view as we see Steve clear away the bushes and branches and shit with his hands. (The shield is currently on his back.)
CAP'S MIND :
"Come to think of it...why am I alive? Must be Fury's doing. I knew he'd get the Cosmic Cube sooner or later..."
BOTTOM ROW/FRAME THREE:
We're back to the top half of Cap's face. His eyebrows are up. He's suprised at what he's looking at.
PAGE #3
HUGE FUCKING BATTLE COVERING THE WHOLE PAGE
You will need some great poses, make no mistake here Blank.
We can barely see Cap smiling in the jungle with his arms knocking aside some shrubs as the lose group of Iron Fist, Luke Cage, Ms. Marvel, Wonder Man and Spider-Woman fight WW2 Jap zombies with swords in an immense clearing with WW2 era planes in the dirt.
Iron Fist is kick a zombie, Cage is throwing one at some other zombies.
Ms Marvel is clutching her wrist as zombies close follow behind her. Spider-Woman is beaming shit with whatever goofy powers she has.
Wonder Man is dead and being eaten.
He is wearing that coat you're so found of.
(Not on an angle Cap can see, otherwise motherfucker would be be grimacing and shit.)
All of this is seen through what look like binocular lenses.
But whose?
PAGE #4
4 rows this time. The first three are wide panel. The fourth is three panel.
WIDE PANEL/ ROW 1
We can see hands wrapped around binoculars.
WIDE PANEL/ ROW 2
We see the same thing, zoomed out some. We can see a black hooded figure with goggles on. It's apparent it's Captain Punisher, but we're not sure yet.
WIDE PANEL/ ROW 3
We can now see a hill. Captain Punisher has lowered his binoculars, and is gritting his teeth.
PUNISHER: "I'll be damned. Not him."
PAGE #5
3 Rows.
Top row will have two panels, middle will have three, and bottom will have a wide one. The tone for this page will be manly and violent. Use thuds and noises as needed.
TOP ROW/ FRAME 1:
Cap lands and is crouching, shield in hand. The side of Zombie Skrull Wonder Man is to the far right of the panel.
TOP ROW/ FRAME 2:
Cap lunges out of this position and slams the outer rim of the shield into
Wonder Skrull's zombified head.
MIDDLE ROW/ FRAME 1: Cap squints again as one of those classic comic effects of sensing something comes around his head. Half of Cap is visible as he stands ready. He heard a gunshot. The look should be all FUCK MY AMERICA SENSES ARE TINGLING.
CAP'S MIND : A Barrett M107? You always loved them American, Frank.
MIDDLE ROW/ FRAME 2:
Iron Fists brains fly at Cap, which he blocks with his shield.
Cap looks dumbfounded as zombies encircle him.
Captain America: "DAMN IT, FRANK! FRIENDLY FIRE!"
MIDDLE ROW/ FRAME 3:
We're at an isometric view, as Cap is encircled by the Japanese zombies as well as the now zombified Skrullvengers.
CAP'S MIND : Zombie Skrulls? How long have I been dead?
BOTTOM ROW/ WIDE PANEL:
Cap points his shield to the right as heads explode simultaneously around him.
PAGE #6
3 Wide Panels.
(TIME FOR A BLOO BLOOING)
TOP ROW/ WIDE PANEL
Cap and Frank are about twenty feet apart from one another. Dead bodies surround Cap. A sniper rifle is on the ground beside Frank.
CAP'S MIND : Frank Castle is a man with a tragic past, and a broken mind. Years of tragedy and nightmares were his only companions.
MIDDLE ROW/ WIDE PANEL
In the same position, Frank takes off the hood and goggles, pivoting. As if he's walking away.
CAP'S MIND : I knew why he took up my cause. He wanted to look past his own pain and fight. For The Dream. Couldn't blame him.
BOTTOM ROW/ WIDE PANEL
We're now at a different angle. A hoodless Frank is at the rightmost of the frame with tears in his eyes as he walks away from Cap at the leftmost of the screen at a distance.
Frank: "I'm so sorry, Steve."
CAP'S MIN Sometimes dreams are the best we can hope for.
CAPTION BOX IN CURSIVE:
THE END
Then we realized that wasn't really beating Frank, so...
quote:
PAGE #6
3 Rows. First Row is two panels. Second row is too. Third is a wide panel. Fourth is two panels.
TOP ROW/ WIDE FRAME
Cap and Frank are standing about 20 or so feet apart. Cap's got bodies of WW2 zombies and Skrullvenger zombies surrounding him, and Frank's got his rifle pointed towards Cap's head.
MIDDLE ROW/ FRAME ONE
Punisher is all we can see in the frame, as he points towards Cap on an angle that gives us a clear view of his rifle, and his head/goggle combo. He is gritting his teeth.
PUNISHER: "You picked the wrong man to impersonate, Skrully."
MIDDLE ROW/ FRAME TWO
In that exact position, he pulls the trigger and it makes a clack noise.
BOTTOM ROW/ FRAME ONE
Looking pissed, Steve starts to take off his mask.
BOTTOM ROW/ FRAME TWO
Steve tosses it at the ground, landing on Spider-Woman's ass.
Captain America: "Frank, what the hell is wrong with you? And why the hell are you wearing that costume? If anyone is a Skrull, it's you!"
PAGE #7
4 rows. The fi
FIRST ROW / FRAME ONE
The "camera" is now on Frank, as he takes off his mask.
FIRST ROW / FRAME TWO
Frank tosses it on what's left of Iron Fist's head.
Punisher: "There, Steve. I guess neither of us are skrulls. I k-kind of feel like an ass now!"
SECOND ROW / FRAME ONE
We're back on Cap now.
FOURTH ROW / PANEL ONE
Frank is in full view. OR SHOULD WE SAY SKRULL FRANK?
He has the human Frank mask in his left hand.
Punisher: "Wait...what the fuck?"
FOURTH ROW / PANEL TWO
With no warning whatsoever Frank blows his brains out.
PAGE #8
We're looking up at Cap in the first person, as he looks down on the Skrull's body. His mouth is agape and he looks confused. There is blood all over Steve's outfit and face.
At the bottom lefthand corner a Looney Toons symbol (The circular rings) has two dudes popped through it. Bald me and you with your Laboof hair.
Anjin: "B-L-B-B-L-THAT'S ALL FOLKS!"
Also, my entry is ten kinds of ugly.
At least for the first page.
(send me a fixed one, I can't be arsed)
because I'm awesome
We said fuck it and ended the first round early so we could start work on the second.
Yeah. The guy who did all of his job should do that.
Yeah. THAT WAS ME.
So, yeah.
6 page comic. (That later became 8, at Blank's request. A bad idea, that!)
Page 1:
Three frames for the top row. The middle is a splash dropping over the bottom row. The bottom row has two frames.
TOP ROW/FRAME 1:
There should be a depiction of the ocean at night with stars and shit, with water and whatnot.
Caption Box At Bottom of Frame - "Into the arms of death he fell, casting a shadow over our lives...
TOP ROW/FRAME 2:
A hand is splashes out of the water. Actually, it's a glove. A very familiar glove.
Caption Box At Bottom of Frame - "His days of justice, honor and glory ended with tears in our eyes..."
TOP ROW/FRAME 3:
We can now see a figure swimming to a non-descript island from a great distance.
Caption Box At Bottom of Frame - "His deeds so great, his love so deep and deserves one last reprise."
SPLASH FRAME:
Captain fucking America is on his hands and knees crawling forward on an angle that clearly lets the reader see it's Captain America. His left hand is partially obscured by the second frame and his pinky and ring finger are where the third frame would be.
Caption Box At Bottom of Frame - "A battle to be won, dear fallen son. Your destiny. Arise."
PAGE #2
7 panels in total.
3 Rows.
The first is a wideframe panel on the top row.
The other two rows are three panel as usual. (I'm thinking along the lines of Fell's format. Brief and shit.)
TOP ROW/WIDE PANEL:
Captain America stands up. The "camera" is aimed behind him. He stands on the beach amidst a jungle island. There are rocks and trees and shit to his left and right to drive home the fact the place is massive in comparison to him.
MIDDLE ROW/FRAME ONE:
Cap is parallel to the reader, running through the bushes and shrubbery. His whole body is in view. (He's carrying the shield.)
MIDDLE ROW/ FRAME TWO:
The "Camera" is now on the upper half of Cap's face. His eyebrows twist into that great angry/determined look that defined him all those years.
MIDDLE ROW/ FRAME THREE:
We again see all of Cap's body, as he does a very cartoony stop. His feet do a little skoooooch noise and he abrupty stops. There is a scream noise in big letters over the panel.
BOTTOM ROW/ FRAME ONE:
For Cap's inner monologue there should be a tiny shield with the star to let you know this is him thinking.
Cap is squinting, his left eyebrow cocked.
CAP'S MIND : "Where am I? Was that Carol?"
BOTTOM ROW/FRAME TWO:
We're in a first person view as we see Steve clear away the bushes and branches and shit with his hands. (The shield is currently on his back.)
CAP'S MIND :
"Come to think of it...why am I alive? Must be Fury's doing. I knew he'd get the Cosmic Cube sooner or later..."
BOTTOM ROW/FRAME THREE:
We're back to the top half of Cap's face. His eyebrows are up. He's suprised at what he's looking at.
PAGE #3
HUGE FUCKING BATTLE COVERING THE WHOLE PAGE
You will need some great poses, make no mistake here Blank.
We can barely see Cap smiling in the jungle with his arms knocking aside some shrubs as the lose group of Iron Fist, Luke Cage, Ms. Marvel, Wonder Man and Spider-Woman fight WW2 Jap zombies with swords in an immense clearing with WW2 era planes in the dirt.
Iron Fist is kick a zombie, Cage is throwing one at some other zombies.
Ms Marvel is clutching her wrist as zombies close follow behind her. Spider-Woman is beaming shit with whatever goofy powers she has.
Wonder Man is dead and being eaten.
He is wearing that coat you're so found of.
(Not on an angle Cap can see, otherwise motherfucker would be be grimacing and shit.)
All of this is seen through what look like binocular lenses.
But whose?
PAGE #4
4 rows this time. The first three are wide panel. The fourth is three panel.
WIDE PANEL/ ROW 1
We can see hands wrapped around binoculars.
WIDE PANEL/ ROW 2
We see the same thing, zoomed out some. We can see a black hooded figure with goggles on. It's apparent it's Captain Punisher, but we're not sure yet.
WIDE PANEL/ ROW 3
We can now see a hill. Captain Punisher has lowered his binoculars, and is gritting his teeth.
PUNISHER: "I'll be damned. Not him."
PAGE #5
3 Rows.
Top row will have two panels, middle will have three, and bottom will have a wide one. The tone for this page will be manly and violent. Use thuds and noises as needed.
TOP ROW/ FRAME 1:
Cap lands and is crouching, shield in hand. The side of Zombie Skrull Wonder Man is to the far right of the panel.
TOP ROW/ FRAME 2:
Cap lunges out of this position and slams the outer rim of the shield into
Wonder Skrull's zombified head.
MIDDLE ROW/ FRAME 1: Cap squints again as one of those classic comic effects of sensing something comes around his head. Half of Cap is visible as he stands ready. He heard a gunshot. The look should be all FUCK MY AMERICA SENSES ARE TINGLING.
CAP'S MIND : A Barrett M107? You always loved them American, Frank.
MIDDLE ROW/ FRAME 2:
Iron Fists brains fly at Cap, which he blocks with his shield.
Cap looks dumbfounded as zombies encircle him.
Captain America: "DAMN IT, FRANK! FRIENDLY FIRE!"
MIDDLE ROW/ FRAME 3:
We're at an isometric view, as Cap is encircled by the Japanese zombies as well as the now zombified Skrullvengers.
CAP'S MIND : Zombie Skrulls? How long have I been dead?
BOTTOM ROW/ WIDE PANEL:
Cap points his shield to the right as heads explode simultaneously around him.
PAGE #6
(Fag Ending)
3 Wide Panels.
(TIME FOR A BLOO BLOOING)
TOP ROW/ WIDE PANEL
Cap and Frank are about twenty feet apart from one another. Dead bodies surround Cap. A sniper rifle is on the ground beside Frank.
CAP'S MIND : Frank Castle is a man with a tragic past, and a broken mind. Years of tragedy and nightmares were his only companions.
MIDDLE ROW/ WIDE PANEL
In the same position, Frank takes off the hood and goggles, pivoting. As if he's walking away.
CAP'S MIND : I knew why he took up my cause. He wanted to look past his own pain and fight. For The Dream. Couldn't blame him.
BOTTOM ROW/ WIDE PANEL
We're now at a different angle. A hoodless Frank is at the rightmost of the frame with tears in his eyes as he walks away from Cap at the leftmost of the screen at a distance.
Frank: "I'm so sorry, Steve."
CAP'S MIN Sometimes dreams are the best we can hope for.
CAPTION BOX IN CURSIVE:
THE END
Then we realized that wasn't really beating Frank, so...
PAGE #6 (REAL VERSION)
3 Rows. First Row is two panels. Second row is too. Third is a wide panel. Fourth is two panels.
TOP ROW/ WIDE FRAME
Cap and Frank are standing about 20 or so feet apart. Cap's got bodies of WW2 zombies and Skrullvenger zombies surrounding him, and Frank's got his rifle pointed towards Cap's head.
MIDDLE ROW/ FRAME ONE
Punisher is all we can see in the frame, as he points towards Cap on an angle that gives us a clear view of his rifle, and his head/goggle combo. He is gritting his teeth.
PUNISHER: "You picked the wrong man to impersonate, Skrully."
MIDDLE ROW/ FRAME TWO
In that exact position, he pulls the trigger and it makes a clack noise.
BOTTOM ROW/ FRAME ONE
Looking pissed, Steve starts to take off his mask.
BOTTOM ROW/ FRAME TWO
Steve tosses it at the ground, landing on Spider-Woman's ass.
Captain America: "Frank, what the hell is wrong with you? And why the hell are you wearing that costume? If anyone is a Skrull, it's you!"
Captain America: "Frank, I've fought them before. That's not how it works. It's not like you're just going to just take off your rubber human mask. You know. Because that wouldn't work."
Cap's eyebrow is cocked again.
SECOND ROW/ FRAME TWO
Frank also suspiciously looks at Cap.
THIRD ROW / WIDE PANEL
Cap and Frank are furiously tugging on their own faces. Their eyes are closed and this shit looks sort of painful.
PAGE #7
4 rows.
FIRST ROW / FRAME ONE
The "camera" is now on Frank, as he takes off his mask.
FIRST ROW / FRAME TWO
Frank tosses it on what's left of Iron Fist's head.
Punisher: "There, Steve. I guess neither of us are skrulls. I k-kind of feel like an ass now!"
SECOND ROW / FRAME ONE
We're back on Cap now.
FOURTH ROW / PANEL ONE
Frank is in full view. OR SHOULD WE SAY SKRULL FRANK?
He has the human Frank mask in his left hand.
Punisher: "Wait...what the fuck?"
FOURTH ROW / PANEL TWO
With no warning whatsoever Frank blows his brains out.
PAGE #8
We're looking up at Cap in the first person, as he looks down on the Skrull's body. His mouth is agape and he looks confused. There is blood all over Steve's outfit and face.
At the bottom lefthand corner a Looney Toons symbol (The circular rings) has two dudes popped through it. Bald me and you with your Laboof hair.
Anjin: "B-L-B-B-L-THAT'S ALL FOLKS!"
Fair enough.
Still writing.
COMMUNICATION, MAN. COMMUNICATION.
IT'S WHAT I DID
But, pettiness stopped me from doing so!
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But we didnt have time to use it.