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desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
edited December 2009 in Artist's Corner
dec 09: collected a bunch of stuff into a new post for posterity and, frankly, compliments, because I'm feeling bad about myself.

28/01
Been slack updating this thread. This is the WORST OP of any thread here. New things last page.

23/11
Everybody look at how fat I am! Facebook album of photos from my exhibition!

10/11

Exhibition in 2 days. Oh god oh god oh god oh god.

02/11

10 days until my exhibition opens. Actually feeling physically ill. Update page 8.

23/10

3 weeks til exhibition. Second last painting. City Stomper. Page 7.

13/10

Update on terrified Zomboid & UFO-Tripod-War Of The Worlds thing. Page 6!

29/09

Hey look a new thing wow jeez he looks upset? Page six.

21/09

Just thought I'd show you guys what I've been working on. Page five.

17/08

THE ROBOT FACTORY IS ALMOST COMPLETE PAGE FOUR YAY

22/07!

Post update Page 4! It's been a month since I started this painting, holy shit I'm slow.

03/07!

New painting update :D

22/06/08

I've started a new painting. In cinemascope! Page 3!

21/06/08

I found a bunch of doodles of big cities from work. Page 3!

19/06/08

New pix! Update page 3 wooooo.

15/06/08

OP becoming superbloaty so I'm going to update progress in new posts. So check out my new post wouldja? Please crit/opine/etc!

12/06/08!

So this painting just wasn't working the way I expected. I think huge canvas + low detail just doesnt work, and I wasn't... committing to this painting. I was afraid to take risks with colour and I wanted things to look comic bookish and pure and fuck it just wasn't working.

So I decided to dirty things up last night. It just felt like it needed more atmosphere.

Also, the idea of the 'mothership' hovering above everything wasn't working. The tripod legs in the background were cluttering up the space and dividing it and it just looked ... off. So now I'm hoping it reads as 'directly above foreground'. Still needs work though.

ufoupdate_3.jpg

Thoughts? I think it's looking heaps better.

As of 28/05

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As of 24/05/08!

Here's the new thing I'm painting. It's quite large. I worked on it for about 4 hours tonight. I'm using a new paint that I'm not used to, Matisse Flow, its a lot thinner than the last paint I was working with and takes longer to dry, which is both good and bad... I'm finding it hard to get used to. I wanted this to be a simple and graphic as I could make it; 3 colours, simple shapes, no fucking around with rendering and lighting. I wanted to paint my original doodle, essentially.

But I couldn't help myself (mostly because the simple look felt cold and lazy) and at 1:30am started on more lighting/rendery stuff. I've stopped because I feel tired and want to watch six feet under. But here's what she looks like so far:

invaders.jpg

Originally started as this sketch:

waroftheworlds-web.jpg

Work in progress, blah blah. Any crits on stuff so far?

Old update spoilered:
Oh, I forgot to say I did this the other day as a bit of fun:

scaredboy.jpg

OLD UPDATE BELOW:

bigguy4webupdate3-fullface.jpg

But I'm not sure, so I'd really appreciate your feedback. Here are some detail shots:
bigguy4webupdate3-sideofface.jpg

bigguy4webupdate3-righteyeball.jpg

bigguy4webupdate3-eyeball.jpg

bigguy4webupdate3-lipsandcollar.jpg

I think there's little bits and pieces I need to tidy up, but right now I'm kinda happy with it! And it's the largest painting I've ever done. Achievement Unlocked!

And here's how he came to be:
pencildownweb.jpg

linesdownweb.jpg

bigguy4web-early.jpg

I moved house, and when I got to my new place I hung it up on a wall. It looked great! Then I started working on the hair and I quickly got annoyed. So I moved back into the face and I thought maybe the swirly scumbling technique looked kinda shitty so I attempted to smooth things out and make the texture more cross-hatchy. It looked awful. So I went back to swirly scumbled layers. What I wound up with was darker than I had intended, bluer than I had intended, and 'smoother' than I had intended. Honestly, I prefer the lighter, brighter version. But there's a lot in this I like, for now.

bigguy4web.jpg

It looks darker than it is due to crummy lighting in my garage.

2 views because I couldn't get a good angle.

bigguy4webupdate1.jpg

bigguy4webupdate2.jpg

Cut back on the sparky orangey fire things because they were really an afterthought in the first place and never what I had originally intended. Replaced with a gloomy backlit cityscape because, hell, that's what I'm all about. Also felt it better suited the overall tone rather than some weird campside sparky nonsense. I think it helps with a sort of cartoony zombie london feel.

And here's something else I'm working on.
DSC00792.jpg

citystomper4web.jpg

citystomper4web-update1.jpg

citystomper4web-update2.jpg

citystomper4web-update2close.jpg

So as I've been working on this I've realised how terribly constructed my initial sketch was. I mean, the perspective was completely retarded and I've had to repaint lines all over the place. Also, the pose of the 'monster' guy is all limbs akimbo and the anatomy, even though its just a silhouette, is pretty abysmal. I'm taking this as a lesson to prepare my initial pencil line better before committing to paint and writing this one off a stylistic choice. 8-)

Other things I've recently done:
xrayman4web.jpg

orangeguy4web.jpg

No seriously. I'm going to be sticking these up on a wall and inviting lots of people I like to come and JUDGE ME A NEW ONE, so I'd really appreciate any comments or criticisms.

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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited November 2007
    man really neat style, i'd like to see some color stuff from you, and maybe some varying expressions on your character's faces. a lot of them are sporting that arrogant apathetic look.

    really cool work though.

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  • GreatnationGreatnation Registered User regular
    edited November 2007
    I agree, some color/finished stuff would be rad.

    But killer style, those cities are great.

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  • galengalen Registered User regular
    edited November 2007
    First handclap guy = Brian Peppers as a smug scenester.

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  • mullymully Registered User regular
    edited November 2007
    I love your style and agree with what the others have said so far - let's see some coloured stuff! Also, your cityscapes are wonderful and gosh that must have taken a lot of patience.

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited November 2007
    Here's some colour stuff!

    And thanks for the encouragement. I really do draw a lot of people looking mildly irritated and I guess it's because I'm always mildly irritated at work. Hah. I really want to take some life drawing classes as I'm bad with full figures.
    The pie chart man is furious!
    attackdoodlecopy.jpg

    Awkward Teens On Their First Day At University.
    uni_characters.jpg

    Poster for a local band.
    tragic-dark-web.jpg

    Dental plan! Lisa needs braces.
    ToothStudy-web.jpg

    In the future, cars are nothing more than unfinished cubes!
    TheSwitchmaster-web.jpg

    Secret agent. This one is old.
    TheAgent-web.jpg

    Conference call with Giant Skull Monster. This canvas is sort of massive...
    SkullHeadConference-web.jpg

    ...Whereas this is the inside of a shoebox lid.
    ShoeboxKid-web.jpg

    This is my latest painting. Yes, another sort of angry guy.
    purplehead-web.jpg

    Terrible phonecam shot, but it's a small wacky landscape. I guess.
    LandscapeRedBlue-web.jpg

    I look inside you and I see nothing.
    HookedNoseAccuser-web.jpg

    Experiment with lighting from a doodle.
    Greyhead-web.jpg

    People have accused this painting of being a self-portrait. It scoffs in reply.
    EyelessTrendoid-web.jpg

    Digital painting from reference, my eyeball.
    digitaleye-web.jpg

    Old and terrible attempt at colouring/lighting one of my city doodles, presented for your amusement.
    AfternoonStalker-web.jpg

    And that's it from us at the news desk.
    AWaveHello-web.jpg

    EDIT: And to clean up the OP a bit, I'm dumping all my doodles from work in this spoiler.
    I drew this on the cover of the notebook.
    moleskincover1.jpg

    A stunning future awaits you!
    februarycitylarge.jpg

    (Hi-Res version!)

    Delectable!
    delectable.jpg

    That poor, mutated boy.
    unwrapped.jpg

    Kind of in a tribal/robot groove at the moment.
    scissorlegs.jpg

    Thinking of painting this on a very large canvas I bought.
    paintingsketch.jpg

    Sketchy movement thing.
    businessman.jpg

    More hipsters.
    peopledoodles.jpg

    In communist Russia, Star Backgrounds You!
    incommunistrussia.jpg

    Ricky, a tit-obsessed co-worker.
    rickyeastwell.jpg

    And another Kleenex lid man.
    kleenexfeb.jpg

    War Of The Pink Highlighter Worlds
    waroftheworlds-web.jpg

    A Pay Rise, You Say?
    WhatDarkMagicIsThis-web.jpg

    Big arse city scape things - linked because they were raping my h-scroll on my crappy monitor.
    Where's Wally's Geometric Cube House?!
    Large city thing.

    This guy is an asshole.
    TeenHeartthrob-web.jpg

    He is watching Funniest Home Videos.
    TheSquareSatanLaughs-web.jpg

    Reach For The Rave Synth Laser!
    RobotReacher-web.jpg

    Did you know?
    NowThatsInteresting-web.jpg

    Go Team Vague Look Of Arrogance!
    LargeNoseTeam-web.jpg

    This shade of lipstick was a bad choice. Actually, no, I look fucking great.
    cyclopsinthe80s-web.jpg

    Comedy Gold!
    Comic-Dog-web.jpg

    Comedy Gold...?
    Comic-Shouldertap-web.jpg

    I have a proposition for you.
    DemonFatty.jpg

    Like, whut-evah.
    SnootyManPencil-web.jpg

    Yes, I draw these at work.
    WalkingOnSunshine-web.jpg

    For a label.
    Thunkers-web.jpg

    On a kleenex-lid.
    KleenexLidMan-web.jpg

    This guy likes music with hand-claps.
    Bug-EyeDoodle.jpg

    So does this guy.
    AmplifierDancer-web.jpg

    And this guy too.
    Blaaaargh-web.jpg

    I am not just an urban planner.
    AmongstTheStructures-web.jpg

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  • vrempirevrempire Registered User regular
    edited November 2007
    I like your style and the way how you draw the facial expression on the character.
    it feel alive. love the pic number 2.
    keep it up, desperaterobots :)

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  • aquabataquabat Registered User regular
    edited November 2007
    I used to work with Mar- uh, desperaterobots, and I can attest to the amazingness of his work. I wish you still had a doodle of me.


    Wait, was that gay sexual inyourendo?


    Anyways, the guy is a artistic genius and needs to get the fuck away from Wes- from the call centre. Do it, fucktard, srsly.

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  • ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
    edited November 2007
    well i'll be damned. it turns out i love your shit. you are now obligated to constantly update this thread for my own personal amusement.

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  • RackhamRackham Registered User regular
    edited November 2007
    I really like your city scapes. Interesting stuff

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited February 2008
    I have updated the OP with some doodles!

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  • ProspicienceProspicience The Raven King DenvemoloradoRegistered User regular
    edited February 2008
    Excellent stuff man! I especially like the tissue box sketch things (are those tops ripped off tissue boxes?). Very fun stuff.

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited February 2008
    Yeah, at work we get tissues for our desks. The only thing better than tearing off the serrated cardboard lid is drawing on the back of it (the finger flap makes a perfect chin) :D

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited February 2008
    Doth have I updated thee, Opening Post!

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  • GreatnationGreatnation Registered User regular
    edited February 2008
    I like what i see! Id go with the blue man. the first one is a little too washed out and the green looks like frankenstein. keep updating, even if you dont get that many comments- no reason not to put it up

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  • aquabataquabat Registered User regular
    edited February 2008
    Im torn between the first and second. The second is missing something though it looks a tad Joker-ish.
    I wonder how many good concepts have been killed by some stupid fucker saying 'it looks too...' or 'it reminds me of the joker slash barbara streisand'

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited February 2008
    Let's begin the count.

    ....One.

    Just kidding baby, you're the tits.

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited April 2008
    I made with the updates!

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited April 2008
    Another update in OP!

    Please feel free to comment, I'm completely starved of artistic peers!

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  • LlyLly Registered User regular
    edited April 2008
    Asspats from me. Really characterful stuff you got going on here. Gief more!

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Hello Art Chums! Updates!

    I have applied more paint to canvas. Adore, admonish, belove or berate; the choice belongs to yee says me!

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  • MustangMustang Arbiter of Unpopular Opinions Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Tis a very cool style...reminds me something awful of art deco designs...except with charachters instead of buildings.....does that make sense? Just the very chiseled features are reminicent.

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Mustang, that's the most bizarre (and therefore the best) description of my work I've ever heard, and no, I have no idea what you're talking about. :P But thanks!

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  • MustangMustang Arbiter of Unpopular Opinions Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Sorry, it was a bit ambiguous wasn't it.
    I was mostly referring to the Atlas statue in NY, lemme find a pic.....
    NY-00635-C~Atlas-Statue-Rockefeller-Center-New-York-City-Posters.jpg
    Y'know that art deco look? I have to apologise for my lack of knowledge of art genres, I never did pay much attention during art history in high school.

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Yeah, I'm familiar with Art Deco but not as it relates to sculpture. But I think I know what you mean now though. There was a film a few years back, Inside Man. At the start of the film I remember seeing some statues from what I assume were bank facades, and I really, really loved the look. Maybe it's the same period.

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Guys, for real. Give me your brains.

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  • KendeathwalkerKendeathwalker Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    I like the drawing quite a bit. You could inject a bit of saturated color here and there for some more interest.

    A technique I use is lay down a very saturated color then go on top of it with a less saturated color. let some of the under color come through and it usually helps if the first color is about the same value or darker than the color on top.

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Thanks Ken; you talking about the big green guy?

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    If my new painting had a narrator, surely it would be Morgan Freeman. OP updated!

    EDIT: Also I recognise that they technically are not tripods as they have four legs. I never was good at maths.

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  • ProspicienceProspicience The Raven King DenvemoloradoRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    I really like the colors in your paintings desperate.
    QUADPOD!

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  • aquabataquabat Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    I feel your characters are based in world where Matt Le Blanc spread his seed like a zombie spore virus out onto the world, and the result is that everyone turned into weird clones. Also, they became mildly angsty and existential.

    But I love them all the same.

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  • KendeathwalkerKendeathwalker Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Thanks Ken; you talking about the big green guy?

    yes

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    OP Updated; What think thee, AC?

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  • NibCromNibCrom Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    I really like the Quad-pod picture, but I'm having trouble making out the shape in the upper left. I'm assuming it's a flying saucer, but it seems kind of vague. Just a thought. Cool piece!

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Thanks nib, the big dark shape you mean? Or the round blue thing right up in the corner?

    If its the thing up in the corner its a bright blue hole leading up into the mothership, which is what the whole big dark shape is. It looks brighter in real life; i'll try to take a better snap.

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  • NibCromNibCrom Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Yeah, I think we're both talking about the mothership. Maybe it's just dark on my computer.

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  • SublimusSublimus Artist. nowhereRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    I like the sketch a lot better. What happened to that sweet foreground tentacle?

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Yeah, the sketch has an energy I havent really managed to recapture. And you know, I don't really know why I didn't bother with the foreground tentacle this time around. But I might throw it back in, because it really did help with establishing some scale.

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited June 2008
    Ladies and gents, updated the OP. Crits/opinions desired!

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  • Stupid Mr Whoopsie NameStupid Mr Whoopsie Name Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited June 2008
    I like the new iris on the robot tripods!

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  • MustangMustang Arbiter of Unpopular Opinions Registered User regular
    edited June 2008
    TBH, I dig the original sketch more than the paint....I think you've lost something in the transfer, but what it is I can't put my finger on. The elongagted tripod head doesn't seem to work as well.......I don't know maybe it's the heavy colours that are hindering it and that you are not using any values to portray distance. And I'm finding the bridge to be a little claustrophobic.

    I do like it though....there's just elements there I'm not enjoying.

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