Hey, I haven't posted around here in a while, I've been busy with school. I'm going to Parsons, I'm in my first year, and my intended major is illustration.
Sketchbook stuff, some stuff is master copies:
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Figure drawings, from a live model, probably around 20 minutes. Because the time was so short, we weren't supposed to worry about the face. I had a problem with making my heads to small, but once my teacher pointed it out, I was able to fix it.
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I asked my teacher what I should be drawing at home, out of class, and she said to try drawing myself from a mirror so, these are from the last three days. The last page, from today, I think is way better than the rest. I feel like every time I do one I get a lot better.
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This top one is pretty bad.
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Edit: Fuck, Photobucket made everything so small. I'll fix it later, sorry, heading out now.
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From class Friday.
Considering these are supposed to be drawn from life, i wouldn't think so, but I've been known to be wrong before.
Not to say your artwork doesn't look very nice (because nearly all of it is great) but it seems like your style is a little overbearing when it comes to life studies.