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My Stand Up Set at The Comedy Store

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    DarkWarriorDarkWarrior __BANNED USERS regular
    edited March 2010
    The cancer joke was on SNL weekend update.

    http://snltranscripts.jt.org/05/05bupdate.phtml

    Yeah some guy on youtube said he heard it. When I wrote it, it seemed to easy but now that I know it's been done before it's out of my set.

    Thanks Canada.

    Maybe THEY stole your joke.

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    AliasRomanianAliasRomanian Registered User regular
    edited March 2010
    The cancer joke was on SNL weekend update.

    http://snltranscripts.jt.org/05/05bupdate.phtml

    Yeah some guy on youtube said he heard it. When I wrote it, it seemed to easy but now that I know it's been done before it's out of my set.

    Thanks Canada.

    Maybe THEY stole your joke.

    haha I wish.

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    MetalbourneMetalbourne Inside a cluster b personalityRegistered User regular
    edited March 2010
    The cancer joke was on SNL weekend update.

    http://snltranscripts.jt.org/05/05bupdate.phtml

    Yeah some guy on youtube said he heard it. When I wrote it, it seemed to easy but now that I know it's been done before it's out of my set.

    Thanks Canada.

    Maybe THEY stole your joke.

    haha I wish.

    You'd be surprised. I can't remember who it was, but a guy confessed to doing exactly that on the radio. He needed material for an SNL skit, went to a local club in LA and stole some unknown comic's stuff.

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    DarkWarriorDarkWarrior __BANNED USERS regular
    edited March 2010
    You could always just rework it.

    They say laughter is the cure for everything.
    I tried laughing at my wifes cancer. I miss her.

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    NappuccinoNappuccino Surveyor of Things and Stuff Registered User regular
    edited March 2010
    You could always just rework it.

    They say laughter is the cure for everything.
    So... I laughed at my wifes cancer. I miss her.

    Small tweak but I think it is better for it.

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    Rorus Raz wrote: »
    There's also the possibility you just can't really grow a bear like other guys.

    Not even BEAR vaginas can defeat me!
    cakemikz wrote: »
    And then I rub actual cake on myself.
    Loomdun wrote: »
    thats why you have chest helmets
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    DarkWarriorDarkWarrior __BANNED USERS regular
    edited March 2010
    Nappuccino wrote: »
    You could always just rework it.

    They say laughter is the cure for everything.
    So... I laughed at my wifes cancer. I miss her.

    Small tweak but I think it is better for it.

    We can split the $20 he uses to buy it from us.

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    NappuccinoNappuccino Surveyor of Things and Stuff Registered User regular
    edited March 2010
    Agreed

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    Rorus Raz wrote: »
    There's also the possibility you just can't really grow a bear like other guys.

    Not even BEAR vaginas can defeat me!
    cakemikz wrote: »
    And then I rub actual cake on myself.
    Loomdun wrote: »
    thats why you have chest helmets
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    AliasRomanianAliasRomanian Registered User regular
    edited March 2010
    Nappuccino wrote: »
    Agreed

    Dang . . . i don't even have $20 dollars :( .

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    NappuccinoNappuccino Surveyor of Things and Stuff Registered User regular
    edited March 2010
    I'll go as low as a buck fifty


    with interest :P

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    Rorus Raz wrote: »
    There's also the possibility you just can't really grow a bear like other guys.

    Not even BEAR vaginas can defeat me!
    cakemikz wrote: »
    And then I rub actual cake on myself.
    Loomdun wrote: »
    thats why you have chest helmets
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    Patrick RipollPatrick Ripoll Registered User regular
    edited March 2010
    There is very little that is harder than stand-up comedy so the fact that you've gotten this far is an achievement. Your material is for the most part really good (though some jokes like "laughter is the best medicine" are VERY tired) but like most people here, I think you have to work on delivery and character. Also, you need to learn better ways to deal with the gentle heckling like that girl who shouted "Do it!" or the booing.

    Keep going.

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    Grim OutlookGrim Outlook Registered User regular
    edited March 2010
    the first thing i thought of when i watched this was dan mintz, you guys have a really similar style.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UUNJeffmLZE&feature=PlayList&p=B1DF31702D4F99E4

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    Descendant XDescendant X Skyrim is my god now. Outpost 31Registered User regular
    edited March 2010
    Heres the guy, Jason Rouse

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rHG1zqc_l9c

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NAKTSccVU0A

    Its hard to say but vid 2 at about 4 mins is probably the darkest joke.

    This guy is Canadian, and he is fucking hilarious. He was actually big enough up here to get a special on Comedy Now that gets run on the Comedy Network now and then. His stuff is pretty dark all around.

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    stevemarks44stevemarks44 Registered User regular
    edited March 2010
    Just looked at my tickets and indeed they have a two drink minimum stipulation on them. Either way, let me know next time you're doing a set. I just moved here and wouldn't mind meeting up with some PA fans and catching your set.

    (Does that make me weird...or just lonely?)

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    DarkWarriorDarkWarrior __BANNED USERS regular
    edited March 2010
    Just looked at my tickets and indeed they have a two drink minimum stipulation on them. Either way, let me know next time you're doing a set. I just moved here and wouldn't mind meeting up with some PA fans and catching your set.

    (Does that make me weird...or just lonely?)

    I imagine at an establishment like that it'd be a little better than the strip club where I paid $5 for an Ice with coke.

    And yes I like Jas Rouse, his stuff is totally R but its generally funny or so horrendous its funny.

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    AliasRomanianAliasRomanian Registered User regular
    edited March 2010
    Just looked at my tickets and indeed they have a two drink minimum stipulation on them. Either way, let me know next time you're doing a set. I just moved here and wouldn't mind meeting up with some PA fans and catching your set.

    (Does that make me weird...or just lonely?)

    Hey man, if you want to hang out I'll be at the comedy store sunday night at 6:00 pm to like 8:00ish or so. They have an open mic at that time so it should be fun.

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    MetalbourneMetalbourne Inside a cluster b personalityRegistered User regular
    edited March 2010
    did you find anything out about PAX yet?

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    AliasRomanianAliasRomanian Registered User regular
    edited March 2010
    did you find anything out about PAX yet?

    I haven't sent the email out yet, will end up doing it today :).

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