I agree with Urantia. It looks like his right arm should be pulled back a little more, so it's a it more behind his head. Also, and this may just be personal preference, I'd say open up his left hand instead of a fist. If he's just walking, there's no reason he's have it clenched.
Either way, it looks pretty awesome. I love the lighting.
I had the right further back and around, but i found the angles clashing, the left originally had a flashlight which i played around with, im signing off on it though, now everything on it annoys me, that gun needs reference, the chest needs re proportioning, and that bloody right arm :P
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MustangArbiter of Unpopular OpinionsRegistered Userregular
edited July 2010
Ungh, sorry I deleted that paintover, it was done on a crap monitor and I only just realised how much of a fail it was.
Anyway, the forearm definately needs shortening, and maybe a little rotation forward.
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Your structure is solid but their is no life in this pose. It needs more rhythm! Even if it is a robot.
(Good job subduing Regal in the back ground as well.)
Either way, it looks pretty awesome. I love the lighting.
Anyway, the forearm definately needs shortening, and maybe a little rotation forward.