I think as a result of how you're working out the perspective, you may have elongated the side/rear end a bit. Also, the squaring off of the sort of half moon side vents and giving a angle bump at the rear end rather than curving smoothly down makes the rear end look a bit more like a Lancia Stratos or a Countach. You also might want to reconsider the rear window- obviously you've had more first hand observation than I have, but I'm pretty sure you can't see much out of the back due to where the engine is, and the 2 big pillar things in the back.
Tried to do a drawover but it kinda blows...(few things more frustrating than try to tell someone what they should do when you can't do it yourself in order to prove the point!)
rear end look a bit more like a Lancia Stratos or a Countach.
I could kiss you in a non-homosexual way sometimes bacon. That's exactly what I thought of the back end, but in fitting with beavo's style, I think these kind of inconsistencies provide some of the charm to her work.
see I made you a drawing on paper of a bugatti
and inside the car was you and me and we were really happy and were best friends
I crumpled it up and threw it in the garbage.
Now I'm even more sad, and I'm going to cry into my pillow until I fall asleep. And later die of dehydration because of all the water I lost through crying. So you basically just killed me, I hope you're happy.
The rough line for the windshield and its unevenness bugs me. The style of the rest is very clean and smooth so it doesn't quite fit. Maybe I'm the only one. Perspective looks much better!
I think the pattern on the windshield looks fine because it forms the shape of the rear frame and back windshield. I also think the color itself could be more subdued to not attract the eye quite so much to the windshield though.
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I think as a result of how you're working out the perspective, you may have elongated the side/rear end a bit. Also, the squaring off of the sort of half moon side vents and giving a angle bump at the rear end rather than curving smoothly down makes the rear end look a bit more like a Lancia Stratos or a Countach. You also might want to reconsider the rear window- obviously you've had more first hand observation than I have, but I'm pretty sure you can't see much out of the back due to where the engine is, and the 2 big pillar things in the back.
Tried to do a drawover but it kinda blows...(few things more frustrating than try to tell someone what they should do when you can't do it yourself in order to prove the point!)
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edit: bacon sweet, thanks dude i'll look at tweaking perspective when i get home!
hahaha that's two times now that you've fixed a problem only to find someone found something else in the intervening time
oh well!
i'll let the problems pile up while i'm at dinner, then do a big fix!
I could kiss you in a non-homosexual way sometimes bacon. That's exactly what I thought of the back end, but in fitting with beavo's style, I think these kind of inconsistencies provide some of the charm to her work.
it had a big bow on it and everything
i just threw it in the garbage.
I just.. exaggerate
see I made you a drawing on paper of a bugatti
and inside the car was you and me and we were really happy and were best friends
I crumpled it up and threw it in the garbage.
i framed it
bacon? I feel like it looks more buggati-esque now
lightened up that foreground drill, i'm liking it (you may need to refresh to see the change)
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thanks all for your awesome crits!
they are really adding some nice shine to my portfolio
But hey, either way I'm digging the Veyron picture a lot
Yeah, this definitely feels better now. :^:
I do agree with Bombs on the windshield line issue, though.
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