Yeah, the dialogue balloons could be placed with more care to make the order more clear. I wouldn't mind more line variance with the character art. I really the paper mache backgrounds. Comic is really funny!
Yeah, there is a lot of text in this one, and a lot of back-and-forth dialogue. I think we just need to pay extra attention to speech bubbles...it seems to be our biggest problem.
Sir you are a comic genious and your friend is a top notch artist. As someone who is working on his own web comic, I despise your talent. Don't change a thing.
where the booties come to shake. Rofl, reminds me of the time we tried to reword my milkshake. I would instruct you how to improve your milkshake, but I would not do so without compensation.
NappuccinoSurveyor of Things and StuffRegistered Userregular
edited October 2010
Jlm, you might want to take that link down... I'm not sure where its supposed to lead but I'm seeing a wide assortment of pictures including titties (and the the safe for work kind)
edit: thought it was flagged inappropriate between me seeing it and posting about it
NappuccinoSurveyor of Things and StuffRegistered Userregular
edited October 2010
No... i think whatever image he was trying to link to got removed from the site (for whatever reason) (or he just linked to the home pg somehow) and so it just went to the home page of the site. I just so happened to click in at the right time to see the homepage and a nekkid lady before she too was removed (though she was removed for being inappropriate)
I think I really like this comic because it seems to have a very "Master Shake vs. Frylocke" kind of feel. Keep it up and please keep posting in case I miss stuff. (;
You're quickly becoming my favorite webcomic! I love how you are willing to change up the art style every once in a while and experiment. It keeps it feeling fresh.
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Edit^2: Thanks Paradise!
comic is good, though
"Where the booties come to shake."
Glad you liked, though
http://cdn.holytaco.com/www/sites/default/files/images/2009/11/19_0.jpg
edit: thought it was flagged inappropriate between me seeing it and posting about it
what were you looking at J-lamp?
ps: love AT-AT chameleon.
(pre-emptive fuck you to starwars nerds if i got the quadruped war thingie wrong)
edit: pps: i don't really get the human arm on the snake. kind of takes away from his dragon costume...
http://www.hrwiki.org/wiki/Trogdor
1700s porn. It's so...proper.
wow, i never heard of that
I love Homestar Runner.
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This comic fills a hole in my heart that I didn't realize was missing until just now.
Haha!
Those Halloween costumes were great too.
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Happens to me all the time when ours goes out :P
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What no?
It's what he does
Really nice arc, J-LAMP. Best one so far.
Continuity is a bitch, but you just made her your bitch.
On the second of the three last panels, it seems that his right hind paw wasn't painted.
But for now....
it's science!