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Hitmen For Destiny
Thorsby
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Hello. I make this strip called Hitmen For Destiny. I would like criticism on anything about it, including dialogue and plot. Here is a link to the first page: http://www.webcomicsnation.com/thorsby/destiny/series.php?view=archive&chapter=24643
Here is some art:
Here is some art:
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I seriously am lost for words.
if, you know, the art wasn't so uh
terrifyingly bad
Ass ugly art, but damn these are hilariously bizzare! Clink the link for more crazyness!
to be fair, that small child was asking for it
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do it
Wait, it already is.
That vulture head is very good.
Also this comic is fucking fun as hell to read.
Art makes it that much better.
"I was born; six gun in my hand; behind the gun; I make my final stand"~Bad Company
"I was born; six gun in my hand; behind the gun; I make my final stand"~Bad Company
This dude must be whacked off his head.....I think up some pretty bizarre shit sometimes but jesus......this defies belief.......I feel like I've gone a little bit more mental for having read it.
If it had good art, I'd imagine that it would single handedly drive up psychiatric admissions.
If this had been done by HR Giger I would never get on the internet again.
"I was born; six gun in my hand; behind the gun; I make my final stand"~Bad Company
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WAIT! NO! AAAAAH!
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wtf
thank god for the internet
The craziness is what makes it so fantastic. I mean that creature in the OP is fucking genius! I love it! And the art actually suits the naive writing style, and for me, makes this the second best comic i've ever seen posted here after Allan's. I'm not even kidding. It's just so awesomely camp and silly!
drawing all this in a different style would have taken years, probably.
I am pretty sure he can draw very well,if he wants to because the composition, as simple as these drawings are, work well and you always know what's going on.
the plot is just great. I love it .
Based on what?
His perspective is so ridiculously off. The huge heads are reminiscent of Beavis & Butthead but the art's much worse than that. I mean, toward the beginning of the series when he shoots that kid, he amateurishly has the butt of the rifle very conspicuously going over his shoulder instead of making any effort to draw it seated against it. That's just one example.
Yes, it's ridiculous looking and wrong. But the way he is telling the story i've got the notion he is not doing it for the first time.
If you tell a kid to draw the same story, drawings might look very similar but the whole layout and arrangement would be very confusing, making it hard to follow the story.
It's hard to explain. Just an impression i got while reading the comic.
Also on one strip he drew George Lucas, Tarantino and Hitchcock. Although the drawing isn't technical good, he captured their facial features very well. Which is difficult for an amateur .
However i might be completely wrong as well. ;-)
Haha, It's just like the ridiculous dreams i have
And somehow, it's entertaining. It's like self satire. I don't know. I think I need to lay down.