love the colors F, but if that skull is meant to be something of more importance i would place a bit more emphasis to make it pop out more, i didn't even notice it until second glance. Also the water near the forground needs to be more reflective of the sky. Other than that keep it up.
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"I was born; six gun in my hand; behind the gun; I make my final stand"~Bad Company
You know that if you post right after I do, you HAVE to critique my work, because the next 2 pages will be ooohs and aahhhhs about your womenz! (Which they def. deserve.. awesome work btw!)
Doing some value scale painting studies in a Drawing and Painting 1 class I'm taking over the summer. This is my fourth, but I kind of liked how it turned out. Oil on 9x12 paper.
f87 that environment looks noiice would maybe suggest adding shadows from those aircraft to give it more depth. I love the water up close with the reflection.
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rad. it's mainly the pinky nub sticking out of the side of her hand that I think is throwing it off.
how is lulu for your book? if you don't mind me asking, how much do you make off the cover price? I've heard that the profit margin through them is ridiculously low.
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It's a simple mistake ;p you merely took the side of the torso and connected it to the front part
Also yah the legs are to long and they feel like the pants were drawn there without any thinking of the leg under it
Heres it without the person over it
(I also adjusted the feet yours were a tad flat)
oops and quoting melting doll
edit: Also I really don't like the posture of the legs, i'm going to see if I can do something for that.
there yah goooooooo orik
also because I have so much free time being summer I also decided to push the form more
I'm not really digging anything I do recently...if ever.
Ok, here is an environment wip, please critique!
"I was born; six gun in my hand; behind the gun; I make my final stand"~Bad Company
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hope to post more later.
"I was born; six gun in my hand; behind the gun; I make my final stand"~Bad Company
I dunno, it makes me laugh.
But, besides that, its awesome! Really well done man.
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I need a creature for my portfolio! So, thumbs!
(Also, I'm going to use this creature (humanoid type) as a D&D 4.0 boss!)
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Also, update on my environment. Trying to finish it today, but meh. The ships suck still, and lots of places still need refinement.
You know that if you post right after I do, you HAVE to critique my work, because the next 2 pages will be ooohs and aahhhhs about your womenz! (Which they def. deserve.. awesome work btw!)
You gotta finish that Tsunade!
the ass on the right looks really athletic. The one on the left looks really voluptuous.
I'm sure it'd make an awesome sitcom, though.
(I like the episode where sporty-ass got the hamster stuck in her mouth)
wak, draw more comic broads.
How long did you stare at the ass before you came up with that? haha
Update: (I wanna call it finished)
Edit, botlp, totp:
Actually my critique of wakkawa's asses just sounded like the setup for a sitcom.
Then I remembered there was a family guy episode of where they watched a sitcom about a (literally) giant ass.
And Peter says "I like the episode where he got the hamster stuck in his mouth"
That's why I threw it in there. Because I have this strange need to reference tv shows whenever I can.
I am stress-testing this theory.
f87 that environment looks noiice would maybe suggest adding shadows from those aircraft to give it more depth. I love the water up close with the reflection.
however, i always think his fingers are wonky looking.
I wish I could handle the female form that well, and I can HANDLE a FEMALE let me tell you what!
i'd love to see ivy (or any other licensed character that i care about) done in his normal palette though.
Also, thanks for the crits on the butt. I knew something was wrong with it, but just couldn't figure it out.
how is lulu for your book? if you don't mind me asking, how much do you make off the cover price? I've heard that the profit margin through them is ridiculously low.