Rorus Raz wrote: »
There's also the possibility you just can't really grow a bear like other guys.
Angel_of_Bacon wrote: »
Not even BEAR vaginas can defeat me!
cakemikz wrote: »
And then I rub actual cake on myself.
Loomdun wrote: »
thats why you have chest helmets
Mabelma wrote: »
I haven't done any life studies like suggested but that's because I just don't know how to do it. I can't wrap me head around it. How do I do? Do I start copying what I see? Do I study it? How do I study it?
NibCrom wrote: »
Only put the comic one on there.Just fixed my panel template so that's the only one included it there.
You've got some interesting premises here. I kind of like the one with the guys racing to the stall. It needs some more development though. I like the idea of the guy blocking the wheel chair man from using the stall... but really it doesn't make sense. Why are they both racing to that stall? Obviously the wheel chair guy needs it cause it's a bigger stall, but why does the other guy need it? It's the only stall open? You need to effectively communicate your jokes.I'm glad you like it, I know they could use some work. I having a lot of trouble when it comes to making the set up for the punchline. I'm working on improving that.
Watch your word balloons. There is tons of white space in your Rock Band comic, yet you have the word balloons blocking people's faces and heads. Also, it's hard to tell what is happening in the last panel of that comic. Does he just knock the tv off the stand? Some of the text seems fuzzy in the comic as well. The size of the text should remain consistent throughout a comic, unless there is a need to emphasize dialogue (shouting) or making text quieter (whispering).Keep text consistent and don't blog faces, got it. In the last panel he's basically swinging the guitar at the tv but I'm having trouble with that pose even though I used reference for it.Do you by any chance have any other comment? Maybe on the one panel gags, or anything at all. Feel free to critic any of the new pieces.
Tony (off on the side) (not inside the panel): Heard the news? The bed intruder song is on the RBN.
Rick: I don't care!
Rick (Sarcastically): Feel free to keep talking though.
Tony: Well they recently
Rick (ballon overalaps Tony's ballon as if Rick started talking and cutted Tony's dialogue): Say, hand me that guitar I wanna play this song.
Rick (about to swing the guitar at the tv): This is gonna be a fun song!